To love you more than I may ever say the place where hearts are no longer measured where tears are joy and depth immense and no one ever dared to venture To trust in you with love’s belief so beyond any ocean’s deep further than the stars that shine larger than the days of time To love you more than I’ve ever said a place in my heart that’s never bled a place once guarded and locked away and yet for you, I give away I trust in you with a faith beyond a sacred passion of my whole devotion I give you my heart, gentle and warm to beat with your heart together as one
I love this! The artist might be Strudwick or Burne-Jones-the woman in the painting has "Burne-Jones" eyes, but a few artists he trained did them similiarly, like Strudwick. Excellent work.
Elegant and classical, Debby. The strictly metred and rhymed form you have chosen here beautifully frames your deep feelings so well expressed. The flow is driven by the authenticity of emotion and carries on way after the last line. Breathtaking with it, thank you. Kate xx Yes, Cortlandt Street is the shutdown subway station beneath Ground Zero. Doubtless closed for obvious reasons and whilst all that heavy construction is in progress overhead.
I agree, more a tender love letter than a cold poem, more like a flickering flame than a spark, the words are telling not asking.
More love?.......oh yes!!!!!!!!
This is one of the nicest love letters I have read in a while, if it were meant as a Valentines wish it would surely captured the one it was sent to...
A collection of love poetry both relatable and unique.. Poems both joyful, playfu , yearning and romantic. The Poet has exposed his heart and soul in words of love and admiration. Take a journey through the thoughts of a Contempary poet of love. Poet
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Regis
More love?.......oh yes!!!!!!!!
Georg
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Be always safe,
Karen
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Most beautiful Debby!
Love,
ET
wonderful poetry...
John