This is a beautiful poem! Gorgeous imagery! Thank you! Katie Simpson

Hello Debby,

Great image, and one terrific penning . . . Bravo!!


Hugs,

Lance

I love poetry that gives the reader a peek into the mind of the author. Fascinating piece! Your friend, kgcummings... Kathy

You provide much substance for reflection within your verses, Debby. Thank you for sharing your "discovery." Love and best wishes,

Regis

Don't untangle it too much, I love your brain - the way it works - right now! Such a cool world: part dream-induced, part right-part left, grammar on - grammar off, style of yours! I haven't read all the poets at AD, but you are onto something unique. Like the art too. If you have a moment: how did you do that pic?
Also I see you've dispensed with punctuation totally. It does force one to slow down in reading or else I "phrased" some of the lines wrong
Later again, michael

F a s c i n a t i n g !

moments of contentment born from the paradoxes of self are ageless heartbeats of discovery ...

uplifting and well written poem ...

I love reading this poem very much,take care

Edwin

mind cobwebs, left and right - untangling, swept away -well expressed Debby, expectation, lightness in the poem, (reminds me of ambidextrous poems id write with left and right, tho' often clumsy/made me 8 xx:o)

Just wonderful the way you go through the thought process to envision things more clearly, almost like a cleansing...

Be always safe,
Karen

I felt like curling up alongside you immmersing myself in your disentanglement. I so love time alone and stillness to discover ones true self and whatever else is revealed! I love the way your lucid mind conveys these complesities! Kudo's, Debby!

Eileen

Debby, thanks for revealing this 'collage' well done!

Peace,
Dan

Excellent, excellent contemplation; I relate to it; connect to it. I especially love the idea that a certain bliss sits patiently waiting to be brought forth in epiphanic moments. I love that the Universe sends its "instructions in paradox" - that inspired action leads us along our way. I love that "stillness" is an aspiration. Once again, I find our sisterhood in your words.

There seemed to be a lot of unentanglement needed here, LOL.
But anyway it is one fine piece.

Merry Christmas to you and family,

Walt

wow--i love this!

You can entangle your brain any way you wish...but why is here the picture of the Temptress Captain's Cabin above? because if I remenber correctly you wasn't "...this woman who was becoming a stillness..."
Then...another great poem from your quill.

Georg

Well Deb if this is how you Untangle your brain you better do it more often and share with us for this is a truly great write. Enjoyed
Fee