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if you want to be god you will need a goddess she wants to be pampered he wants to be worshipped she loves the attention he loves the affection he spoils her with his known exotic she gives to him her own erotic then she delights him with fragrant perfume and he will perform to any love tune don't forget candles and freshly washed hair and even better is a shower together slipping and sliding oooing and aaahing doing and being the giving and taking and the receiving and sharing for every woman becomes a goddess and every man is made into a god lighting candles

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Reviews of "if you want to be"

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

You areSO right. Great piece

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

Such an excellent write wonderful flow too..
Light a candle for me Okay
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

Hi Debby,
Such an excellent write...

Beautiful...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

Debby, excellent. we must remember to never take more than we give.

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

wonderfully awesome you go goddess this was romantic and sweet nice job on it

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

Debby,
"slipping and sliding
oooing and aaahing
doing and being
the giving and taking and
the receiving and sharing

for every woman becomes a goddess
and every man is made into a god

*lighting candles* "
YESSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!
Excellent write.
Peg

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

Debby, excellent! Light a candle for me while you are at it. Please. Bill

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

excellent verse! you are so right!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

Truly a good write.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

Ditto...excellent.
~E

Reviewed by Red Matrix (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

"Woah!" - Joey Larwence (TV's Blossom)

This was excellent!

-RedM

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

Yes Debby, excellent write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

light one for me Debby;-)...fantastic poem...wonderful flow...

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