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An Old Yellow House
by Mary E Lacey Desertrat → (All Poetry by Mary E Lacey Desertrat)
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a more simpler time of life, spending time at grandpa's as a child; only to find out as an adult, things weren't so simple at all. Part I

 

Ruby red carpet atop a hardwood floor
In an old two story yellow house. A virtual child’s
playground, who could ask for more? Entering Pop-Pop’s house
the aroma of his cherry pipe permeated the air. Mom and Dad sat
and talked to him, while I explored the place.  Pop-Pop sat in his favorite wing back chair.
Going into the kitchen, Pop-Pop had a big black stove,
on the front was printed Ben Franklin, whoever that was. 
Than I listened to my Mom yell, “Get out of there!”
she was always upset about something, I really didn’t care.
I quietly went down to the basement,
a place I had never been before, so many
strange things down there, but the
oddest, an old trap door.
Mom went looking for me and when found
I thought I was going to die
When I looked at her face, I knew
I'm in trouble now!
She was so angry she couldn't speak, she made
me go in the living room, sit on the couch
and not make a sound.
There I sat with my arms crossed, stuck out my lip and started to pout. 
Pop-pop  felt Mom was
was being harsh and said,  Let’s get out of the house for a while,
 and get a little sun. 

Pop-Pop showed us his huge vineyard, my eyes were wide with wonder. 
Grapes were all over the place especially the ones down under.    He handed
me a basket, and said, well, “go and get me some grapes”, this was fantastic,
 I put some in my basket, and felt the wonderful sunshine on my face.
After a day in the warm sun, I was getting tired. 
Pop-Pop said let’s go out on the porch swing and set for a while
The grown-ups talked and talked
Their talk put me to sleep like it would any child.
Going to my grandfather’s house was a part of my childhood I’ll always
remember, a wonderful thing, a simpler time, a wonderful place
to be.
And even after Pop-Pop passed away, this house was always special to me. But as I grew, I did research on this house, and found it was built before the Civil War.  That was just one thing I found of interest;
I researched the house further and what I found next I couldn't believe!  To be continued...

 


 

 

 


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 Reviews of "An Old Yellow House"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 3, 2009
You have recreated and shared the experiences most effecitvely via your verses, Mary. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by kg cummings
Reviewed on January 7, 2009
Mary, this is a wonderful setting for a tale that I'm sure will unveil a new world of surprises. I love series poetry and will read more. Your friend, Kathy

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
Oh Mary! What a captivating write this is!! You left me suspended in the air and I can't wait to find out what's next about this house.

Will go to read Part II now.

Love and hugs,

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on December 29, 2008
great flashback story of verse Mary, my grand father drank apricot brandy and carried a 38 revolver in his belt, you're right sometimes the house holds a different story

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on December 29, 2008
Thank you Mary for sharing the memories of a child's relationship not just with her Pop-Pop but with the home he lived in.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed on December 28, 2008
Mary~!

Descripted exceptionally well . . . !!


The grace of God be with you!

Lance

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on December 28, 2008
Mary, thank you for sharing the wonderful visit to your grandfather's house -- your childhood memories of the man and the house are warm and loving -- may peace and love always be with you -- JMW

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on December 28, 2008
Your biographical poem is warm, friendly and interesting. What an enjoyable read. I, too, recall stories about visits to my grandparents' homes. Using poetry to record those memoirs are wonderful.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 28, 2008
...a captivating story...looking forward to part 2..well done!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 28, 2008
Would love to use my metal detector around on that property, so many things sink below the surface over time...just think what treasures, like this poem, could be dug up...Ed & Rufuz (w00f)

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 27, 2008
With eight great grandchildren some of which have never seen me this is sure a nostalgic write and I hope when I'm gone it will be filled with wonderful memories for those precious little tykes who brought great pleasure to me with their smiles and hugs and games we played. Great write for us old folks to ponder.

Reviewed on December 27, 2008
Wonderful visuals in this nostalgic write; I still remember my own grandpa's house in Cleveland: the sound of our feet creaking on their hardwood floor, the smells, his voice, the porch swing: have so many memories of grandpa and grandma Srdjak, my mom's parents; now they're all in Heaven, reunited, catching up on lost times. Very well penned, Mary; brava!



(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 27, 2008
I love the feel of this splendid poem , Mary!
it evoked so many memories of my own, a wonderful
warm tribute to your Pop Pop!Look forward to part two!

Love, and Happy New Year,
Eileen

Reviewed on December 27, 2008
Mary,

The imagery you pen makes me think of my own Grandpa's house: it had creaky floors, a certain smell ... if Uncle George (Mom's brother) came over, you'd smell cherry pipe tobacco ... thanks for the memories. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, and Happy New Year!, Karla.


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