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Who Wins Life’s Lottery?
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My niece gave birth,
momentous time
our Kurt is born
his smile sublime

The ignorant cried
for Down’s his lot
forgetting though
the love he’s got

Either side a bed
a perfect child
they smile too
all meek and mild

So of these three
which child is struck
with the good fortune
of our Lady Luck

A year flies by
joy always there
at least that’s true
for only a pair

Kurt and girl right
a pleasant scene
still all smiles
loved and clean

Baby boy only tears
where no one can see
dirty and alone
sodden with wee

So of these three
which child is struck
with the good fortune
of our Lady Luck

Let’s look again
with a decade passed
how do they fair
what now the contrast

With Kurt no change
smile beaming wide
love still surrounds
there on every side

For boy child a house
but he has no home
is this freedom
for a him to roam?

Our girl faired worse
life full of dread
a ten year old kid
sharing an adult’s bed

So of these three
which child is struck
with the good fortune
of our Lady Luck

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 Reviews of "Who Wins Life’s Lottery?"
Reviewed by Diane Wagner
Reviewed on May 2, 2004
Well done. Certainly causes one to ponder, doesn't it?
Diane

Reviewed by D.J. Ludlow
Reviewed on July 15, 2003
Excellently written and beautifully expressed David.

Birth is but the beginning of a life. But the value of a life can only be measured at the last breath of it - for that is where the measure stops.

We do not always make our own luck but with a little bit of fortune, a little bit of effort, and a whole lot of compassion we can often make somebody else's.

The world is a little luckier for this poem.

DJ.

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2003

OUCH OUCH OUCH! OUCH again! You have captured these view points perfectly and slapped the hell out of a reader with them.

Thanking you,

Teresa

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on May 21, 2003
Wow my sweet friend..
This is awsome beyond words..
This shows amazing talent!!
I LOVE this!!!!!! I am so
honored that I inspired it!
Huggggs,

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2003
This is very good!

Reviewed on May 19, 2003
Excellent words of wisdom here, Indeed, which fared better, Loved this poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2003
Sad. Well done, David. You cover'd a great many things with this one. Bravo.

Reviewed by Brittany Renée
Reviewed on May 19, 2003
Crafted and shaped beautifully. Fantastic rhyme and superb efforts of theme. More than efforts, you gracefully wrote it so erase that word!

Warm Love
*-Brittany-*


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