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Sorrows Storm
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Reflecting On Love & Life...

Photography Artist: http://carnisch.deviantart.com/

 

Sorrows Storm

 

Tremulous heart…

Breaking into the future of regret…

No words can soothe the depths of solitude’s grieving soul;

Aching for yesterday is the past left in the dismay of perils passage…

Unfinished memories…deserted beneath the choices of change…

Detrimental love…privation speaks to the voices unheard…

Release sorrows storm into the hope of tomorrow…

Values promise is the self worth of you…

 

 

(Written: July 26th, 2008 12:09 p/m)

In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love

Embraced ~ Embrassé

poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique

Copyright© 2008 Victoria L. McColley


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 Reviews of "Sorrows Storm"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on August 2, 2008
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed on July 30, 2008
Vic- This articulated poem is simply divine and filled with truth!
Our hearts will shiver and quake at times, and strengthen us as you find our path!
I just want you to know Vic, I appreciate you! ALL OF YOU!
WRITE ON!
Lovely pict. of a quite moment of reflection and solitude within! Waiting for something to get out...
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Sheexooo
Oh, Tremulous and privation, I haven't heard in so long! What a writing style YOU have!

STay Positive!

Reviewed by J AG
Reviewed on July 29, 2008
True quality pressed into a page worthy of handwritten messages engraved on aging parchment, edges carefully singed into a winding patchwork and then lovingly rolled and wrapped with a silk ribbon - You have brought the soul out of the shadows and into the sun. How we all have benefited from peering out from behind the curtain and seeing the reality of what awaits us "out there." You are truly a talent. Thank you for sharing "you" with us.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
a love of tempestuousness for certain -- JMW

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
Beautiful moody write with the wisdom of known pain and the soul to handle it. Liz

Reviewed on July 27, 2008
"privation speaks to the voices unheard" Wow, I really liked that alot and the picture went very well with the words. Great read!


Tim

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on July 27, 2008
A parting of the drapes to see who speaks the truth, listening to the inner voice. The last line speaks volumes, V...Sorrows Storm is Tomorrow's sun...be well, Victoria...

Love & tea and oranges,
Sage

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

Outstanding poemization of the subject dealt. "Sorrows Storm" glows .

I salute You, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 27, 2008
Love should be the handkerchief that dry all your tears.

Georg

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 27, 2008
Victoria,

This is so exquisite. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 27, 2008
Ah Vick, this is so dreamy sad, when we give our all to love and it does not work out for whatever reason it does often seem like there is little or no sense in falling in love. We tend to look back and want to know answers when sometimes it just wasn't meant to be. We should instead remember and cling to the smiles shared and make them a part of our future.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on July 27, 2008
There will be storms in the horizon but like Annie says "The Sun will come out tomorrow".Speaking of the sun,your poem is fill with brightness that "rise" above in front of my eyes and "sets" in my heart.Take care of yourself Vicky

Edwin

Reviewed on July 26, 2008
Beautifully inspiring realization that the Light does shine after the dark of storm - well done, Vickie!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on July 26, 2008
Your poem offers one hope and expectation for a better tomorrow.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed on July 26, 2008
Your heart will be so much bigger ,and more knowing, someday because it is so big ,a more rewarding love can enter. Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 26, 2008
Vicki too many know of heartbreaks and suffer through them. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 26, 2008
If my magic touch wasn't in the shop for repairs, Victoria,
I'd massage that tremulous heart and make it all better. You
are indeed the Den's Romantic Poetess. -gene.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on July 26, 2008
Vickie,
This so speaks to my heart. We are definitely connected by heart break and commitment to healing and living in the now, my lovely friend, peace to you and may the Goddess shine her light down on you and bring you calm and serene moments of tranquility..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed on July 26, 2008
Beautiful love poem about a breaking heart. We've all been there, I think.

Mary


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