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Eternality's Tide
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a poetic dance of emotional expression from the love of friendship from the love of soul from the love of life from the love of love
(Photo; Bar Harbor, Maine 2009) Eternality’s Tide Simpatico walked with druthers ascension- Ample are these respites of emotional spirit… Delving grants upon pyres provender; Victuals of freedom spread their wings… Upon comforts privileged rescues of credence; Deliverance chimes the song of congruity… Bowering affectional footholds of belief; Meriting the bounteousness of liberality… Rectitude looks into the eyes of integrity’s trust; Reaching for the sustenance bound to dignity’s semblance. Throngs of passion kneel upon silence beckoning; Offering altruisms faith amid veils noble convictions… Comity reaches from suggestiveness of pristine essences; Evoking gratuitous secours of devotional tenderness… Entrusting visions explode upon eternality’s tide; Releasing nectarous flavors into a permanent opulence; Casting love’s plentitudes into permeations of the vowing soul… (Written: August 25^th, 2009 8:10 a/m) In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Embraced ~ Embrassé poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique Copyright© 2009 Poetess Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

well diddly done/

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on August 28, 2009

Whatever you write Vickie has a flow to it, You steal our time and heart with all your words. thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

Simpatico
I love the way you expressed your thoughts in this beautiful piece
Nature walks are always pleasing and truly inspiring
Simpatico there is a word I think most of us have not heard in a while
Simply beautiful your work always so unique!
PS Simpatico in Spanish means handsome
Wishing you Peace Love and Light�Yolie

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Simpatico - a wonderful word expressing what most will never have with another person. I love how you clarified provender with victual. Your have a truly unique poetic mind that lavishly paints its imagery and message.

"Comity reaches from suggestiveness of pristine essences"
this is truly a definitive line - a state of harmony and respect reaching out to offer to another the pureness, and choice marrows, of honor, love, and respect ... brilliant!

Your work just keeps getting better.
Must be all those vegetables you're eating. (-:
Blessings ...

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Inviting, as always, Victoria...luring me into your love affair
with language. Beauty becomes you. -gene.

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

I know THIS "ALL" feels right comin' from YOU Honey!
but to re-read this 2nd time, 3rd.. OH boy, I am still LOST!
YOU have be channeled... from some other century and that writer
was Surely an Unbelievable presense!
I love what you write!
I love what you stand for!
I love what you do!
I love the creative YOU!
I love the talent you bestow
but you already know!
This was not suppose to be a poem but I guess I'm a Poet and don't know it.. lol

Love and Big WARM Hugs, Purple_Passions, SHEExooo
YOU simply and utterly AMAZE Me, with your style of writing Poetry! and the words that you fathom forward! I can say nomore...I'm always floored! then I start writing them down and reading their meaning! I will be smarter by the evening! lol

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

...orchestrated to perfection!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Not sure I understand all the big words and my dictionary is packed away for my move on Tuesday but the ebb and flow with such a wonderful picture makes this poem a true work of art to be savored and reread.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

I think being with a woman like you on a beach like this I would not only love to hear your poem recited to me but take the time to understand each word in greater detail and how you write so lovely-well done

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Eternality's Tide, like a pulsating life of its own, constant, receding and coming back, receding and coming back...

Georg

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 26, 2009

...APPRECIATING NATURE AND RELISHING THE LOVE THAT ONLY IT CAN PRODUCE. DONE SO VERY WELL AND ENJOYED. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

V*i*c*t*o*r*i*a, I could read your poetry all day.
Always,
Deborah