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Tormentedly
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~Dark Poetry October~ Unforgotten tenebrous footsteps Unveiled by deceptions ravine of lies Temerity stole from itself Where darkles bridle gorged on furrows blight...
© Photographer: Barsik \| Agency: Dreamstime.com Photography Artist: Galina Barskaya http://www.dreamstime.com/Barsik_info Tormentedly There is a cloven dagger sledged into the heart of love; Bound by the gambit of sorrows; Paved by the core of mandrels trammel… Looking onward with thievery’s sty; The innocent eyes of trust now close forgotten by the impedance of footsteps pending the end of time… Severed by betrayal’s shackle; Confined by the grave of lament mourn; Lost inside the fosterage web of deception; Voices ensnare deviant’s pestilent thoughts… Fallacious words are the forked tongue speaking; Like a hallow demon roving cryptic shrines; Haunting unerring eyes of passions’ sinuous fire; Kissing the breadth of truth with devious lies… The oblique dungeon of obsessive torments rises to be seen by the bondage of tortuous truths. Deviatory words spoken with spurious greed are the labyrinthine curses of a thousand lives… Those lost souls of desolate claimants mourning; Besieged by fraught obscurity of entitlements; Scorns promises by the laden weight of fettered prisons where there are caliginous stones inside… The virulent heart of inflections soul; Shrouded by restrictions false cloths; …announces The archaic hands of embedded misery; Smoldering inside destructions wastrels; Tormentedly reaching…from quietus shadows (Written: October 19^th, 2009 5:23 a/m) with the depths of darkness as my shroud of hidden spies: Dark Poetry October 2009 In Anguish, In Vengeance, In Menace, In Discordance of Lust… *Or was that supposed to be Love?* *Copyright© 2009 Dark Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley* Sincerely Bound By Incantations, Poetess Victoria...The Dark Pestilence of Romance Archaic Mistress of Caliginous Temptations

Reviewed by David cox (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2009

taking us with you into the darkness of your soul.
dave

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on October 23, 2009

Very spooky and well written too. The pic is fabulous as well. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 22, 2009

.....this photo goes perfectly with your words that are deep and full of such emotions...had to read this 3 times..fantastic work!

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

the language of the lost, perhaps the damned? oct. is almost over and your shackles will break.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

From a virulent heart that invited a sweet maiden to my dungeons...I have provoked to come out a literary shadows monster!

Georg

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Vickie,
Powerful and compelling in thought, image and, of course, language.

John

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Awesome imagery. Wonderful. Liz

Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen

Fallacious words are the forked tongue speaking;
Like a hallow demon roving cryptic shrines;
Haunting unerring eyes of passions� sinuous fire;
Kissing the breadth of truth with devious lies�

Yup, the beginning of all ends. Ascensions descension.
How painfully sad................sigh....

Very nice Victoria, this one shot me......
in the heart.

Reviewed by George Carroll

A melodious hymnal of English words so pleasing to the ear.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Shrouded by restrictions false cloths...wow, great lines and dark time...well done Vick.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring

Ah yes I saw you on Lulu. You're good.
This is good. You've written and await the kind words..fantastic.
steve