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Poised Wood
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...a new millennia "recreational sport" within internet anonymities...

Deception is a cruel act... It often has many players on different stages that corrode the soul.”
Donna A. Favors Quote

 

 

Poised Wood
 
He’s on a feral goose hunt;
Trying to plant decoys in fields of corn;
Coyotes watch from the hedge row’s brush;
Smokescreens are the umbrage his apparition burns…
 
But the sparrows call into the dividing echo;
While he places wooden ducks to sit in the lake’s center.
They have been painted like beautiful mallards sheen;
Blowing their drilled tube flutes, they call for mates flock…
 
Floating boats are covered by limbs pernicious blind;
Decorating burnished branches of earthen obscurity.
Bister leaves are tightly strapped of autumnal dryness;
Stolen from living trees looking to rest for winter…
 
Cinnamon coffee stirs her cream with tender fingers;
Contemplating his smoke rings in the dark morn…
He inaccurately dresses himself in careworn anticipations;
Wearing his fuscous oaky camouflage of a woman…
 
 The sparrows sing warning to the observant crows:
“We can see his little stick prodding;
He has ores painted pine green…”
 
…and the crows flock together watching;
Admiring his decoys made of poised wood;
All the while knowing…as they preen their feathers;
A hunter’s secrecy is denied in vain…
Imposter…
 
(Written: December 9th, 2009 8:42 a/m)
 
In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love
Embraced ~ Embrassé
poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique
Copyright© 2009 Poetess Victoria L. McColley
 

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 Reviews of "Poised Wood"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on December 13, 2009
Vickie,
Like at a high school reunion, believe only half of what you hear. This is inventive, and it's the perfect metaphor for those who seek to hide the truth. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 11, 2009
I truly love it, as a past hunter and lover of the outdoors I often said that the game is usually much smarter than we give credit for. Love the pic and the warm soft colours Vick.
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Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on December 11, 2009
Excellent poem,Great piece.take care

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on December 10, 2009
Vickie,
Eloquent satire, and deserved; your complex, subtle approach lays no blame but lets the reader decide. I like!

John

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on December 10, 2009
The con game. The hunter and the ducks decoy, the fisherman and the colorful lore, the black widow.
You have weaved a most wonderful story with a twist packed in a poem!

Georg


Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2009
I'm sensing a double-meaning here. Hmmmm. Nicely done. Ebullient imagery.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on December 10, 2009
Oh yes they are much smarter then one thinks Vickie.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on December 10, 2009
Ah, we would know a thing or two about decoys...flushing out impostors who methodically shoot themselves...buried in a quiet country cemetery, laid to rest with the grave marked "Here lies, lies"...Poised Wood engraves an old record with a doleful ring of truth...we have the knowledge to know that when we are being studied by the predator, we do not move to put ourselves in their crosshairs...huddled in the windrows with you, mistress...armload of blankets, picnic basket filled with delicious edibles and you make origami for me, ducks flapping their wings, a sign your cammo pants are at least a quarter mile farther hanging on our tentcamp...your poised woody jutting forth, assertions fitted like a mallard bobbing in and out of the water...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 10, 2009
most enjoyable reading Victoria
thanks for sharing
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 10, 2009
Victoria, This is intriguing, when I was young my Dad took me duck hunting, there are many messages camouflaged in this masterpiece..."Cinnamon coffee stirs her cream with tender fingers;" love that line as well...wow great work!
Love and Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2009
imposter....oops, whoops....dunno...but beautiful woods.. Dear victoria...best wishes...neerja


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