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White Ice
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Curves with inlay sculpt like a woman...
White Ice She found the concealed passions; Speaking to her restless soul… I was building a totem at the time; The pagan fire brought indoors… Winter solstice brought snowfall; My hearth is sandalwood redbrick with a 7’ mahogany shelf mantle… Curves with inlay sculpt like a woman. Masonry set within charcoal grey, stretching entrance across the wall, like thighs spread for hungered lovers… My totem of wood I kindled with emotion; I used my heart to build my fireside flames- Scrap papers from my poetic manuscripts; Never waste the elements offered… I gave back to my impassioned muse; And the fire grew hot… dancing scarlet’s; Crimson’s orange blaze…within sapphire hues… Yellow’s gold licking white ice… …My fire burns (Written: December 23^rd, 2009 7:07 a/m) In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Embraced ~ Embrassé poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique Copyright© 2009 Poetess Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on December 28, 2009

Vickie,
Here your passionate spirit shines. Excellent.
Sheila

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 27, 2009

C'est tr�s bien fait, Vickie; et j'aime aussi beaucoup tes photos. Bises de moi,

R�gis

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on December 23, 2009

The coolest metaphor! It's inside the pod! Swelling up to Poster Print size and tack it above the hearth! It's good to see those starlings so fat...group survival and healing fires melt the thighs...what's above will never see White Ice, that place just below the navel ring of Pagan fires...warm desires.

Sage

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

' I used my heart to build my fireside'...------ I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Vickie, The 'heat' rises from this poem, "yellow's gold licking white ice... ...My fire burns" You are 'bad' and that is good!
DeB

Reviewed by L. Figgins

You've chased the chill from this cold winter's morn. Fantastic scene setting and the imagery rocks! I like the line "...pagan fire brought indoors". Past and present intersecting. Fine work, Victoria. Blessings...Lin

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Never ice was felt so warm!

Georg

Reviewed by Jms Bell

AS ALWAYS YOU DESCRIBE YOURSELF SO WELL AND ALWAYS SOLIDLY SUPPORT YOUR THEME. B-R-R-R-R! THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU AND YOURS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS