Private Jewels (poem) by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on May 26, 2010

VERy intriguing my dear, and eye awakening of your spirit within!
I Love it!
A relate able essence of spirit that is PRICELESS!
I am always amazed and intrigued with the depth of your poetic feelings and heart!
Evoking a more tender side!

Much Love, Blessings and Warm Hugs, SHEEoxxo

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on May 25, 2010

Bottle it up....wow this is enveloped with all the senses, powerful as is gentle~
Love,
Christine

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2010

Victoria, Another 'sensuous' poem that one
can feel in their imagination and play
over and over again. ..
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 25, 2010

Now, this is raw erotic chili pepper applied on an open libido!

Georg

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on May 24, 2010

Vickie, I am speechless, this is sensuality at it's finest..I love the tenderness here in your words, and as Fee says, it can relate to either gender..Somehow though it feels so much more when you think of two women together, brings a softness to the sensuality of this piece..
I love Sage's comments..her and her Firebrand ideas!!! lol

good work, my dear,
off to dreamland, I am feeling under the weather.
xo peace and love,
Amber "Viv"

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on May 24, 2010

'pyloric essences' ..yes! from 'our secret insignia' Vickie, all the way to 'our claimant territorial flesh' (how well that's put!) yours is such a creative, expressive voice; one of my favourites of yours.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 24, 2010

Hmnnn this is captivating and although Sage suggests it is lesbian originated I think the raw sensuality could be applied to any gender relationship. It is hot, spicy and tantalizingly erotic.
fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 24, 2010

You do write with such flair and a gift. Vickie, it took me five different tries to open your site to read this, not sure why so please forgive me when I can't get through...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on May 24, 2010

Overlaid, superimposed sensualities in other words female anatomy kissing female anatomy, scissor-hitting erect sensibilities and orgasmic propigation reproducing the theory of sapphic intercourse why at its best, Private Jewels coming into contact with the firebrand Sage Sweetwater and her mistress Victoria L. McColley...

Love and Pearls,
Sage