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A Raw Nerve
by Dr. Dorothy B Holtslander → (All Poetry by Dr. Dorothy B Holtslander)
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How we allow our kids to act, and what garbage we allow to soak in, DOES make them who they are.

It hits a raw nerve
When I see
Children running
Through the store
Or screaming at the table
Next to me
Don’t people
Parent anymore?

It hits a raw nerve
When I see
Toddlers dressed
Like ladies
Of the night
While mommy and daddy
Ohhh and ahhhh
And then wonder
When this kid’s a teen
Why she’s pregnant
At fifteen

It hits a raw nerve
When my kids can’t
Watch TV
Cause kiddie shows
Have “gangstas” and “hoes”
In the guise
Of being progressive you see

It hits a raw nerve
When kids rule the roost
They shout and swear
At mom and dad
Who just can’t
Seem to understand
That while they tried
To be their “friend”
A parent is what they needed
In the end!




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 Reviews of "A Raw Nerve"
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 25, 2011
Sadly, parents have had their parental rights diminished in lieu of the state. Not easy to be a parent today and the children have the state on their side.

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on May 25, 2011
Bold and straight to the pointed truth. Thanks.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2011
It has gone way beyond the "just want to be friends," now kids can divorce their parents, have their parents put in jail for spanking the, and the list goes on and on and . . .


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