I used to love sitting on the swing when you were around.
The yard was a flourishing oasis in the middle of town.
The colors were as vivid as a patchwork quilt.
Silence around-except for the gurgle of the fountain that Dad built.
As I looked at the beauty I always felt tranquil.
The day you went away, I felt it still.
If I close my eyes the memories of those days come rushing back.
The wonderful smell of supper wafting out the door still intact.
Sitting on the swing-the days tensions would melt away.
I'd watch my children and listen to the details of their wonderful day.
How they dressed in gypsy garb to eat pancakes shaped like Mickey Mouse.
A large box with a little decoration could easily become a playhouse.
You put so much magic in their childhood.
I know now that you always understood,
Children grow up much to fast.
And you must help them to use their imagination to make it last.
So you took them to a special place,
And you always gave them so much space.
A place where cellar doors could be slides,
And Grandma was always on their side.
A place you got dessert even if you didn't eat,
And drinking water was a game in which to compete.
Rules were made as you went along,
Elvis Presley was still singing his songs.
Bird watching, planting flowers, shelling peas,
You taught how the simple things can please.
A place where snowmen could be flat and smiles abound.
A very wonderful place when you were around.
Today as I walked through your garden,
I had a painful reminder that you went away,
The flowers are gone and in their place are weeds,
I don't even see the birds coming here to feed.
Sitting on the swing, words can't convey how my heart hurts today.
You were the MAGIC and you went away!
My children were very blessed to have wonderful grandparents..
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Reviews of "Magic"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2002
Very well written. I like the way you broke meter on this piece. It works very well. ~E
Reviewed by Joe McCarthy (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2002
Lovely and nostalgic. The poem actually takes the reader there.
Wonderful. It reminds me of the 'blue remembered hills' in AE Housman's poem. When I look back at the good moments of childhood, they're like small stars, where 'I see it shining plain, The happy highways where I went, And cannot come again.' Yet those rare memories are magical, yes. That brings gratitude.
Reviewed by Deirdre Barringer (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2002
a very special memory for very special people. What a lovely tribute.
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Let this coming of age story of a boy named Bean take you back to a simple time. Set in a small southern town in the 1960's, encircled by a river and gleaming white cotton fields.
Such a beautiful deep
heartfelt write...
Trixie
than children
enjoying the memories
we made for them
lovely work