I love the life in this piece. Thank you for sharing it. It's a great reminder.
Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)
Reviewed on November 12, 2003
Dancin' out loud is definitely better than cryin' out loud, for dancin' out loud! Great write. You make me want to take up dancing.
Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2003
i definitly dig the sentiments and the method is one i do enjoy repetition of phrase for example Howl; who wandered... who lit... etc. I think perhaps condense it a little for readability you can say more with one or two of your delightful words more than perhaps you think you dont need 7 to say just 3 very nice.
nice. well said. well read. well felt. dance love, dance....that is what life is about....which as about as much of a comment on content anyone ever gits from me. nice write.
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Learn how someone can go from never gambling to the point where they are about to give up, get arrested, or commit suicide.
Learn how to lead someone out of the depts of compulsive gambling to freedom in Christ.
Barbara Henry
George
Dance on as loud as you like, Jeanette
peace
Love,
Beth
May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)