a momentary streak of light then its gone as life quickens and years pass in solitary splendor
days and nights blur with a whirlwind's fury as lightyears come and go
the elemental brew mixes quasars and quarks outside of time in subjective meanderings
reality perceived reflects ignorance of the true state of life beyond mind and experience
ages become eons suns rise and fall consciousness continues infusing flesh and bone in consumation of light
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Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2004
VERY nice work...
Thanks for sharing,
Rodd
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2004
a momentary streak of light
then its gone
as life quickens
and years pass
in solitary splendor
..I chose the above stanza as poignant..yet I could say that about the whole piece..all I can say that you are on a track rather familiar to me and for this I thank you kindred spirit!
The long tail star can be seen in the back-right side of the picture of the "cometfall", but again, four more generations will have to wait to see it next falling or rising, depending on the cosmological geography of One's mind at the time.
This poem, "cometfall" I add to the list of Your best. You have conceived the most analytical and psychobiological definition of mankind’s loss of memory.
Healthy Happy Life, Poet!
My gratitude, respect and admiration.
On this twelfth day, "Selene/Luna" of the month of Janus - God of the gates and doorways - (Monday, January 12,) 2004, I Salute You, Poet Mark Rockeymoore.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2004
Everything is always changing....nice work Mark....made me think....floria
Maria, raised in the Mafia and educated by the gangs of New York, is hunting the man who killed her Akalina, and she will kill anyone who gets in her way.
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Thanks for sharing,
Rodd
then its gone
as life quickens
and years pass
in solitary splendor
..I chose the above stanza as poignant..yet I could say that about the whole piece..all I can say that you are on a track rather familiar to me and for this I thank you kindred spirit!
Ves *smile*
Reindeer
This poem was Brilliant!
Thanks for all reviews you have left
in the year 2003!
This poem, "cometfall" I add to the list of Your best. You have conceived the most analytical and psychobiological definition of mankind’s loss of memory.
Healthy Happy Life, Poet!
My gratitude, respect and admiration.
On this twelfth day, "Selene/Luna" of the month of Janus - God of the gates and doorways - (Monday, January 12,) 2004, I Salute You, Poet Mark Rockeymoore.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Evelyn.
mate beautifully with it, jazzman!