Pretending (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on July 24, 2002

Hi Marilyn,
I know a few people like
that.... :)
As always great write...

Reviewed by William M. Sowman

Reviewed on July 23, 2002

Thanks for the cheer dear. I needed that after yesterday. At least I was right. But being right sometimes is a heavy price. And I really do need a confidant. Hugs Bill

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 22, 2002

Ah, exposure!

Reviewed by Inam Khaskheli (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2002

very nice and emotional.

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on July 22, 2002

very nice...makes you think

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

Great, thought-provoking piece, Marilyn...
Jenni

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

LOL...maybe I shouldn't have spent that money on work clothes yesterday! No,
I guess I should of...my old clothes were about to be turned into cleaning
rags...~grins~ At least I went to a basement closeout store! LOL...great poem! ;)

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

Absolutely great--powerfully written...

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2002

Kewwwl, this one's totally direct and concise! Good write Marilyn.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on July 19, 2002

Great write and I've known plenty of people like that.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 19, 2002

Great one Marilyn...it is so expressive of how many go through life, too sad that they miss what's important.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 19, 2002

Loved this poem. Makes you think a lot.

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2002

This is a great write.. Sometimes people think the road to happiness is paved in green. I have a family member that really and truly believes that. someday I hope he wakes up and realizes what he has thrown away in his persuit of monetary riches.

Love and Light
dreamweaver

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on July 19, 2002

A very thought provoking piece. Nice end rhyme.

Blessings, Janet xoxoxoxo

Reviewed by Tiana (Reader)

Reviewed on March 20, 2002

A great poem, Mele. That good almighty dollar! Wonderfully written, hun! (((honihoni)))

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 20, 2002

Powerful and well written message.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 20, 2002

Oh Marilyn:

This is great! Strong and powerful message!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$