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You Didn't...
by Marilyn Seray → (All Poetry by Marilyn Seray)
  
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You didn’t look at me

You didn’t look at me and cast me
in that mellow amber glow

You didn’t touch me

You didn’t touch me and make my
eyes flutter like a thousand butterflies

You didn’t smile at me

You didn’t smile at me and make
all my nerves pulsate

You didn’t talk to me

You didn’t talk to me and start a
melody in my heart to accompany you

You didn’t kiss me

You didn’t kiss me so that I’d be
The last touch on your lips.

You left me

You left me wondering if you’ll
ever come back.


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 Reviews of "You Didn't..."
Reviewed by The Gentle Man
Reviewed on June 30, 2003
Oh Marilyn, your emotions are so strong in this one....I can feel the sadness and longing.....well done!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Sad and excellent write from the heart!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
A good one, Marilyn. Very touching.

Reviewed on June 15, 2003
He will come back, don't worry! Good write Marilyn!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
If he didn't he's a jerk!;-) great write Marilyn, I like the way you experiment with styles, wonderful!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Ashamed we have to sit and wonder?
Great writing.......

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
AAwwww!! this one grabbed me by the heart...and choked me!!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Love the way that you put these lines down for us.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Profound!!!

Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
Excellent!

Reviewed on June 14, 2003
This just touched my heart so deeply this evening..beautiful,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
Wonderfully written, Marilyn! I hope this is fiction!


tony:)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
This one tears at the heart. Fantastic write!

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
Hi Sweets, this is a sad song indeed. If it's true, keep the faith, you are WOMAN!

Love & HUGS, JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
Oh Marylin this one is so sad {sad}
It is excellent emotions in verses,
Peggy

Reviewed on June 14, 2003
The only touch that leaves a wondering, and a scar.... this is so heartfelt... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
Wow, this one grabbed my heart!


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