Marathon Man (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2004

Awesome write...I love the verse about the moon...floria

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 21, 2004

Emotively and meaningfully grasping. Thank you, Marilyn. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on January 21, 2004

Dont worry about him i think he is Running on empty
great poem very powerful and Boy do you get the message out

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on January 20, 2004

Excellent imagery... enjoyed this immensely.
Jenni

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on January 20, 2004

Wow Marilyn,
This is one powerful
write...
A feeling that most of
us had experienced through
life...

BRAVO!!!!

Hugs,
Trixie :)

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on January 19, 2004

This is an incredible piece Marilyn.Beautifully and uniquely expressed.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on January 19, 2004

I totally understand this, Marilyn! I gave up a race that I wasn't even running, and the crumbs ended! Love this analogy!
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 19, 2004

Oh how I understand this, outstanding poetry, breathtaking in its sharp image.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 19, 2004

terrific stuff, marilyn; well done, my friend! enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 19, 2004

Seems like he's a bad listener or fool, this is spoken from a heart thats true, yet he has no clue, held on to every word in this poem, very well expressed..

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on January 19, 2004

What an ego I have, I saw the title and immediately, I thought this poem must be about my love making ability. Alas, it was not.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 18, 2004

Great write!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on January 18, 2004

Wow unique writing...What a great poem...telling it like it is.......and the pic is perfect.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 18, 2004

WOW and OUCH this one is so good!

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter

Reviewed on January 18, 2004

Marylin, so good to see this post. Haven't caught up with you
in a while. I once deeply loved a man whom I would not have hurt for
the world--I learned over time that had he stayed in my intimate
proximity he would have been hurt regardless my approach.
Sometimes it's not about us, it's about them. Perhaps the hurt
is something he does not know how to heal within himself yet.
Much Love Vicky

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 18, 2004

Wonderfully expressed Marilyn!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 18, 2004

Sounds like Mr. Marathon Man is running from love
Great to read you Marilyn
Fabulous write.......

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on January 18, 2004

This was excellent! I loved this, so deeply moving, just wonderfully expressed!

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 18, 2004

Marilyn,just WOW!!! Fantastic descriptions and images,I feel like you stole my one time, mantra, only of course you never heard it;-)This really says it all!