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Peace
by SilverCeltic Moon → (All Poetry by SilverCeltic Moon)
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She knelt in front of the alter with a bowed head
Seeking forgiveness for the things that she did and said.
Not too much else had she ever done that was wrong or bad
But what she had done to him made her feel guilty and sad.

His eyes, when she had lashed out in anger, had widened and teared.
Now she was alone, feeling small and scared.
Her beliefs helped strengthen her and made her briefly forget
how his tears had come down so hard, salty and wet.

As she knelt at the front of the ancient church,
the door creaked open with a squeak and a lurch.
He stood there watching her as she knelt in her prayer
she didn’t move, although she felt the weight of his stare.

After a long moment and after she had genuflected,
she turned and saw the love that his eyes reflected.
She knew forgiveness came from God and him, the important two,
and peace flowed within her as she forgave herself too.

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 Reviews of "Peace"
Reviewed by Kijuana Henry (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2004
Genuinely inspiring! I like the
part about the altar with a bowed head.
The picture is gorgeous too! I differ though,
because I believe that God and Jesus are the same,
not two people. Jesus is of a part of God. How can
he be different?
Something to think about. Great write though and Kudo's
to you for an excellent poem!
Kijuana

Reviewed on September 25, 2004
This was so beautiful and uplifting! So nice to see you here again!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2004
Silver...a great write which I totally enjoyed :0) Susan

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2004
She knew forgiveness came from God and him, the important two,
and peace flowed within her as she forgave herself too.
exceptional lines...exceptional poem..

I'm saving this..

Thankyou!

Reviewed by Meva Onyurt (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2004
I can feel the moment of peace and how it fills my veins when I read your poem!
Thanks for sharing:)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
So beautifully inspiring.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 12, 2004
Wonderful story in verse. Love and peace to you oh Silver Celtic Moon. Regis

Reviewed by (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2004
Hi
What can I say to an altar with a bowed head.
Not a lot. genuflexion perhaps.

Sgeig.----would be the Gaelic

Hesione

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2004
EXCELLENT flow and great conveyance!

Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
Reviewed on March 11, 2004
epic in inner dimentions...i loved this poem's message.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 11, 2004
wonderful poetic tale ...

Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on March 11, 2004
Awesome! A loving act, to ask for forgiveness for yourself, when you hurt the one you love.

Reviewed on March 10, 2004
pretty write, silver! loved it; thanks for sharing! enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2004
Celtic this is so lovely...One has to
forgive themselves first...I love Jonathan Bowsers
art...lovely writing..floria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 10, 2004
Most Beautfully written Silver!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2004
Beautiful poem and message Silver......
missed Celtic.....

Lady Peg

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2004
Beautiful message!!!!!

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2004
Beautiful, touching poem....enjoyed it very much!

Andrea

Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Reviewed on March 10, 2004
Lovely gothic write. Franz

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 10, 2004
Insightful write...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2004
Yes self forgivness is the hardest thing to do, great poem, love the flow of it, and its real atmosphere..

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on March 10, 2004
very visual
strong spiriutal insight

john+


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