She knelt in front of the alter with a bowed head
Seeking forgiveness for the things that she did and said.
Not too much else had she ever done that was wrong or bad
But what she had done to him made her feel guilty and sad.
His eyes, when she had lashed out in anger, had widened and teared.
Now she was alone, feeling small and scared.
Her beliefs helped strengthen her and made her briefly forget
how his tears had come down so hard, salty and wet.
As she knelt at the front of the ancient church,
the door creaked open with a squeak and a lurch.
He stood there watching her as she knelt in her prayer
she didn’t move, although she felt the weight of his stare.
After a long moment and after she had genuflected,
she turned and saw the love that his eyes reflected.
She knew forgiveness came from God and him, the important two,
and peace flowed within her as she forgave herself too.
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Reviews of "Peace"
Reviewed by Kijuana Henry (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2004
Genuinely inspiring! I like the
part about the altar with a bowed head.
The picture is gorgeous too! I differ though,
because I believe that God and Jesus are the same,
not two people. Jesus is of a part of God. How can
he be different?
Something to think about. Great write though and Kudo's
to you for an excellent poem!
Kijuana
This was so beautiful and uplifting! So nice to see you here again!
Reindeer
Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2004
Silver...a great write which I totally enjoyed :0) Susan
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2004
She knew forgiveness came from God and him, the important two,
and peace flowed within her as she forgave herself too.
exceptional lines...exceptional poem..
I'm saving this..
Thankyou!
Reviewed by Meva Onyurt (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2004
I can feel the moment of peace and how it fills my veins when I read your poem!
Thanks for sharing:)
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part about the altar with a bowed head.
The picture is gorgeous too! I differ though,
because I believe that God and Jesus are the same,
not two people. Jesus is of a part of God. How can
he be different?
Something to think about. Great write though and Kudo's
to you for an excellent poem!
Kijuana
Reindeer
and peace flowed within her as she forgave herself too.
exceptional lines...exceptional poem..
I'm saving this..
Thankyou!
Thanks for sharing:)
What can I say to an altar with a bowed head.
Not a lot. genuflexion perhaps.
Sgeig.----would be the Gaelic
Hesione
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
forgive themselves first...I love Jonathan Bowsers
art...lovely writing..floria
Love Tinka
missed Celtic.....
Lady Peg
Andrea
strong spiriutal insight
john+