Love...heartbreakingly fragile and sad.
She loves him with the sweetest of devotion.
He looks for more, not knowing what he had.
One day she leaves him with sad emotion.
She walks away from him toward a new life.
He's now without the love she gave him for free.
She can't stay loving him with all this strife
She fears that always she will love him, you see.
Standing by someone who can't love isn't the way.
Especially If he doesn't value your love as sublime.
One day you will have to walk away and pray
that your love for him will fade in time.
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Reviewed by Tiana (Reader)
Reviewed on June 25, 2002
Beautifully written, Kali. I know how it feels to walk away towards a new life... Hit home, hun...
Sweet Aloha,
Tiana ;-p
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Tiana ;-p