When you rupture the
fire of love for you
which is hidden deep
inside my heart without my
knowledge
with the cool breezes of
your words
I felt you are lighting my
heart with joyful candles
But, by saying goodbye
once for all,
you put a permanent fire
to my all hopes and desires.
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Reviews of "A Misunderstanding."
Reviewed by Srinivas Surya (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
From the literary aspect,I guess you will need to improve a bit on the words and sentence phrasing. I am not an expert, but your words have a lot of meaning, only the proper phrasing would make the sentence as beautiful as the thought
Reviewed by Amith
Reviewed on May 25, 2002
luvs feeling well expressed
Reviewed by satish
Reviewed on March 30, 2002
This is a nice poem...I think it goes into your "Dear's" account...
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