If someone dies, we carry their dead bodies !
But if we have to let someone off the heart, death embodies !!
Create an Ocean of tears, heart softens !
Desert be the eyes while heart heardens !!
They were with us and left the world !
They are in the world and left us !!
Their memory is a sweet pain !
To memorise the past moments is vain !
After all, To let go off someone,
is not an easy task !!
To let go off someone from our heart is not easy. It is one way of loss. I compared this feeling with the physical loss of someone from this mortal earth.
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Reviews of "To let go off Someone!"
Reviewed by Srinivas Surya (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Its really a beautiful comparison. I am reminded of a quotation "The real loss in once life is not death, but what dies within us while we live "
Your sentences carry great meanings. Keep up the excellent work.
Reviewed by sumanpreetham
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
very very nice
keeeeeeeeepit up..........
Reviewed by Vahini Epari (Reader)
Reviewed on July 4, 2003
True! it isn't easy to let go off someone.
Life is a voyage that's homeward(to the grave) bound.
Reviewed by Aravind Daruvuri (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
Hello Madam,
After a long time.. ya its true always letting somebody go is not easy.. I am going thru the same kind of situation.. not physical.. but..
You improved a lot.. I appreciate your work
Reviewed by sanju
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
i think this is WO........... i have ever read till now ... wana make more comments ... reply me... sanju reddy ,auckland ,nz
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Your sentences carry great meanings. Keep up the excellent work.
keeeeeeeeepit up..........
Life is a voyage that's homeward(to the grave) bound.
After a long time.. ya its true always letting somebody go is not easy.. I am going thru the same kind of situation.. not physical.. but..
You improved a lot.. I appreciate your work