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Stormy Weather
by Melissa C. Rives → (All Poetry by Melissa C. Rives)
  
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Sometimes the gray can suffocate
from out of nowhere comes again…
A gnawing irritating fog
that saturates beneath the skin.

Where smiles are tired behind the eyes
with withered dreams a jaded mess…
A taste of sorrow and defeat
can form a mountain more or less.

When just too weary to conceive
how shadows rob the light away…
To trample flowers, hide the sun,
beneath these clouds that come to stay.

An ill wind blowing through the mind
recalling secrets of the damned…
Reiterating ruthless words into the heart
where fist is jammed.

Sometimes depression is disease
that rages in a storm its own…
Inflicting wounds that bleed in anger
from the curse of the unknown.

Yet sometimes days just seem to offer
nothing good, like winter wind…
A cold and empty invitation
from a cruel and haunting friend.

While holding breath until it passes
hoping for a slight reprieve…
For sometimes all it takes to mend
is inside self to yet believe.

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 Reviews of "Stormy Weather"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
excellent

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on April 5, 2003
This is Great Melissa! I like the way you write.
Jack

Reviewed on April 5, 2003
This was so beautiful and excellently written, I can relate so very well,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on April 5, 2003
Melissa,
So, so true! You alwaya write from your heart, and this a beauty, something most can relate to!
"While holding breath until it passes
hoping for a slight reprieve…
For sometimes all it takes to mend
is inside self to yet believe."
Perfect ending!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
a wonderful write indeed

William

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
You nailed it, Milissa! That's just what depression is. I have weathered many a storm in my life, but not so fierce as depression. Thank you for putting it into words others could understand.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
exceptional clarity and wisdom!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
This is wonderful......

Reviewed on April 4, 2003
I couldn't agree more...fantastic write.

Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
The perfect metaphor can be so hard to capture, you tied, bound and tagged it here!! Mal.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
You are da Woman!

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
You write like none other. Impressive, yet again!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Melissa, I have always enjoyed your poetry. this is no exception

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
You excel not only because of your beautiful poetry, but because of your beautiful soul!

Reviewed by Brittany Renée
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
I gasp my breath at the boldness of the truth here. The ending is profound as well. And that's about it, too! Medicines, doctors, friends... may be help*ful*... but they do not completely cure like the belief in ones own self. Beautiful and exquisite writing, Melissa!

Warm Love
*-Brittany-*

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Wonderful Melissa.....I loved it all but that last stanza nails it.....You are such a fine poet Sis! Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Melissa...you please me all the time with your wonderful poetry...I love this...I have known depression and the fog you write of...this is so indepth of the feelings that I have felt..and many others too I am sure..great write..Floria


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