Melissa,
So, so true! You alwaya write from your heart, and this a beauty, something most can relate to!
"While holding breath until it passes
hoping for a slight reprieve…
For sometimes all it takes to mend
is inside self to yet believe."
Perfect ending!
You nailed it, Milissa! That's just what depression is. I have weathered many a storm in my life, but not so fierce as depression. Thank you for putting it into words others could understand.
I gasp my breath at the boldness of the truth here. The ending is profound as well. And that's about it, too! Medicines, doctors, friends... may be help*ful*... but they do not completely cure like the belief in ones own self. Beautiful and exquisite writing, Melissa!
Warm Love
*-Brittany-*
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Wonderful Melissa.....I loved it all but that last stanza nails it.....You are such a fine poet Sis! Ty, Dani
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Melissa...you please me all the time with your wonderful poetry...I love this...I have known depression and the fog you write of...this is so indepth of the feelings that I have felt..and many others too I am sure..great write..Floria
Jack
Reindeer
So, so true! You alwaya write from your heart, and this a beauty, something most can relate to!
"While holding breath until it passes
hoping for a slight reprieve…
For sometimes all it takes to mend
is inside self to yet believe."
Perfect ending!
Hugs,
Maria
William
Warm Love
*-Brittany-*