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Breaking Away
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All is still in the silence the wind only sighs echoes out through the valley our long lost goodbyes… Couldn’t stay where the heart only twisted in pain forced to breathe death in whispers while love was in vain. Time was never the answer the coldness just grew numbed the feeling of caring I once felt for you… Now it’s over and still you can’t see that I’ve won found the voice to uncover the damage you’ve done. Finding freedom so sweet I don’t know why I stayed couldn’t change your disease never mind how I prayed… Looking back I remember how quickly it faded wounds infecting the mind ‘till my thoughts were all jaded. Though I may never find all the answers I crave it’s enough just to know it’s myself I can save... Life’s too good to be wasted and God knows I tried… now the future to me is a door opened wide.

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Reviews of "Breaking Away"

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 19, 2007

An inspiring write, Melissa. There is wisdom of choice in your verses. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

i always enjoy your work

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

Melissa,
Yes real! For it is real words a wandering that shall find the doorways of mens hearts open!The fruit I tasted yesterday in this vinyard so cool, insisted I return...
My compliments,
Sincerely,
Rodney Evan Bohen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

Excellent write Melissa!!

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

I can relate to this a million and one percent! This was beautiful. The structure was great and the mind in this woooh! You brought me to tears. Amazed, I am. Thank you...Teresa

P.S. I DO SO agree with James David :)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

gr8 write, melissa! :) (((HUGS))) to you and to the kiddos! :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

The message in this poem needs to be heard. Great write!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

Melissa,wonderful poem. Love your positive attitude in a world where many dwell on the negative. Well done.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

Greatness flows within this one.

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

Deep penetrating write about self discovery.
its nice to really dig into this type of write to see what is really there.
thanks

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 6, 2003

simply insightful

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 6, 2003

So Wonderful! I loved this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on May 6, 2003

this is very beautiful Melissa, esp. the ending

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 6, 2003

a wonderful write

William

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 6, 2003

There comes a time when self-preservation must win out. It takes courage to open those doors.
-James

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 6, 2003

I love it !!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 6, 2003

This could have been my story, don't know if i'ts just a poem, but I sure can identify with it...fantastic poetry as always

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