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A Promise
by Melissa C. Rives → (All Poetry by Melissa C. Rives)
  
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Can’t keep my hands from shaking
while holding my breath
it’s calamity swirling
a slow kind of death.

Round and round in my head
fighting for just one day
when serenity banishes
sorrows away.

Before reason has left me
with time standing still
it’s a battle that rages
my spirit to kill.

Cataclysmic it dances
the words that you said…
to the rhythms of madness
a song for the dead.

Falling softly upon me
caress of deceit…
carving heart into pieces
‘till soul is deplete.

Yet I’ll never embrace it
the truth won’t allow…
for I’ll not trade my soul
for the sake of a vow.

Although shaken and damaged
I’ll heal just the same…
while you live with yourself
and your burden of shame.

So, one promise I’ll make you
one promise that’s true …
in the end you’ll be empty
with no one but you.




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 Reviews of "A Promise"
Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on July 13, 2003
Scary how this seems to apply to how I've felt!
-- the last three stanza brought pure chills to my bones ....
Anmyway, great poem!
Shy

Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2003
I can feel the knife bury deep.. This does rock.. I t rocks the Very well done..michael

Reviewed on July 3, 2003
Excellent, well expressed, you touched me here so deeply,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2003
Love it.

Reviewed on July 3, 2003
Beautifully expressed.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 3, 2003
Very well written.!!

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2003
wonderful poem.

Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
Reviewed on July 3, 2003
... hold on to that thought; life abounds at the feet of a free spirit.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2003
The strength of your spirit shines through this Melissa!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on July 3, 2003
Outstanding write....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 3, 2003
Melissa, outstanding poem. It is always tough to awake with oneself.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
Excellent poem Melissa.....Damn how I hate that feeling you so beautifully describe...Thanks, Dani

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
And so it goes.....

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
Oh, the pain! So well expressed!
Leland

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
ouch! Great write!


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