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Scoliosis of the Mind
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Scoliosis of the Mind

 

 

Muddled thoughts of fusion seem to cut into my mind;

bending spine with weight of thoughts—

Decisions that are mine

 

Nerves slice up the back bone; while thoughts invade my mind

Deflating air within my lungs

and moving things around

 

If I choose to fuse my will with that of you or him,

how will it change the face of me

and all that I can do?

 

But I believe, if left undone, the weight of things will bend

the fragile spine that now is curved

under burden fear

 

Conforming, then’s the answer--Fusing will with Yours,

by gently bending curving spine

to bow o’er humble knee.

 

 


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 Reviews of "Scoliosis of the Mind"
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on January 25, 2011

a very lovely write
hug
kat

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 3, 2010
Very well done indeed sweet lady enjoyed very much..take care OK..Hugsss

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on October 1, 2010
Cryssa, this is wonderful, life-cherishing poetry~
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on September 29, 2010
The burden of our ego, sometimes mistaken for freedom, is much more dangerous for our mental/spiritual integrity than the little sacrifice made to accomplish beautiful things. Interesting thoughts in this piece...

Axilea

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on September 29, 2010
That Great Surgeon up in Heaven can seamlessly straighten all kinds of scolisis-of-the-mind (and of-the-will as well). I know he guides those less-great surgeons' hands as well.

A kiss to both you & (+)ie. --Aunt Cher

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 29, 2010
such a well written metaphoric poem

Reviewed on September 29, 2010
Compelling poem and intriguing title; it drew me in. Excellent writing, Cryssa; hope you and your family are well!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on September 29, 2010
Well composed poem, Cryssa

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 29, 2010
Laying things in God's hands takes them off our backs if we have faith.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 29, 2010
Cryssa, I like the title, what you have to say and where you go with this.


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