Remember Me (poem) by Ed J. on AuthorsDen

Remember Me
by Ed J. → (All Poetry by Ed J.)
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This was a surprise poem from my dark side using words my loved one said to me when we had our first argument January 27, 2007,
So preciously I offer My heart foever sworn I view of all adored My gift of words reborn My world to fill desires My all I stand to lose Creative arts aspired My words and drawings fused So much of heart was given That none remains to feel Emotions no more driven My world without a will Devoted love was offered A love of all returned Sweet words were never softer With lies, my soul they burned Farewell my heart, my love my words Creative hands lay still Now gone the grace and beauty That drove my loving will I could no more forget you Then my suffocating breaths Shared dreams, be forfeit to An abyss of empty depths You'll always be remembered For I gave you all I am With losing you dismembered Left a shell, that was a man Goodbye my love Copyrighted 2007 Ed J .

Reviewed by Gail D (Reader)

Reviewed on January 23, 2013

No one could ever forget such a loving man unless they are deaf, blind and dumb, these words you have written just exemplify your passion and love.

Gail

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Reviewed on April 25, 2009

Oh the pain of cutting words from a loved one - I know it too well!
You wrote this really from a heart that loved, "You'll always be remembered" is what we all can say for goodbyes can be said, but the heart never says goodbye.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Keith Rowley

Reviewed on December 9, 2008

Lovely. Reminds me of a verse penned for or by the late Brian Jones:
When this you see remember me
And bear me in your mind
Let all the world say what they may
Speak of me as you find.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on January 9, 2008

A beautiful sad story said in poetic grand. "Remember Me" depicts a true heart under romantic love.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by R Beeman

Reviewed on January 7, 2008

well said and a good reflective write that sounds of peace through pain.

randy