One Door Closes (poem) by Ed J. on AuthorsDen

One Door Closes
by Ed J. → (All Poetry by Ed J.)
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Written about a friends situation and dealing with it
The door behind me closing To my room where lone I sleep My mind in memories of past All the good I choose to keep Thinking why our paths have parted Fill my eyes that will not weep Your gift of flowers showered When we dance with whim on street So tenderly embracing Your love swept me off my feet A call to say you love me Made a plan somewhere to meet How have we drifted so far That no more each other know Our attention separating Our own ways now we go In times we share together Our union fails to grow Our passion set a sunder By one who caught your eye Alone we sleep together Before we say good bye You’re gone but part still loves you And that love will never die Farewell we wished in parting Even though again we’ll see For our son’s life we still share Foolish man, you are too busy Only calls you give to him Soon this boy a man will be My heart now lays in silence For my life is now my child My precious one adores me My companion all the while One day a love will find me And again my heart will smile ©Copyright 2009 by Ed J All rights reserved

Reviewed by Gail D (Reader)

Reviewed on January 24, 2013

Love is waiting for you and will never leave you. I hope you can see the light at the end of the tunnel.

Gail

Reviewed on May 18, 2012

You share a timeless and universal theme of this life/world it seems, Ed. Sad but true. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 1, 2012

I see this is written in 2009, clearly about the turmoil of divorce. I hope things are better now.

Ron