The Day I Made Momma Cry (poem) by Bonnie Lou May on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 11, 2009

tempted like the bee to sorghum, weren't you Bonnie? -- this is amusing -- I'll bet your poor mom was shocked -- cheese pie! -- yum, yum, I can understand the temptation -- walk in the arms of joy -- JMW

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

Ah, your title promised a kleenex alert so I postponed reading, but this one is really quite different than I expected. I should know by now that your things are surprising. (Don't tell anyone, but I would have raided that cheese pie, too.) I am positive that your wise mom knew what you did, and she smiled, remembering her own childish raids on your grandmother's favorite desserts :-)

Ted

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

A sweet write from a sweet lady. Enjoyed this, Bonnie.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

I'm sure Momma forgave you, as did my mother when I decided to one day share one of her freshly baked cakes with our dog! But now you've given me a craving for cheesecake.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

...you naughty kitten..at least you got your pie...(lol) adorable write Bonnie,
Hugs to you,
Christine

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

Let me alone with your Cheesecake and you too will cry! ! ! :-) LOL

Georg

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

Brilliant piece.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

Very cute.
All from a pie
That made momma cry.
Somethings we just don't forget.
Doug

Reviewed by Elizabeth Hobbs (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

Hi Bonnie
I'm not quite sure what a cheese pie is, but it sounds yummy and the poem is great. Cheers! Liz

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

Bonnie,
Awww, memories of childhood. With me it was cookies. Mama kept a box of cookies in our fridge that she saved for our school lunches. I grabbed a handful and ran out to the swings and eat em'. I felt guilty every time I saw Mama making those lunches for us to take to school. I don't know if she ever found out, but "I" knew and that was enough to make me feel bad. Excellent write, Bonnie!

Blessings and love,
~Linda

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

Oh Bonnie, this is such a hoot. You know my Grandmother used to make canolli's to serve to guests. I never liked them, only the cream filling inside and with a miniature spoon used to scoop the filling out and eat it. She always knew who to come after when there was nothing left but the shells...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

I can't help but laugh. You're so sweet. Liz

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

Really Funny Unique Write On!

TRASK

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

Bonnie~!

Everything you write comes to life in such a unique way - I applaud you!!

LOve and Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

Mamas pick their battles..if not, they would battle with the children all day.
Secretly she was happy you loved her pies!

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

funny piece... and it backfired too... hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

Even better than pie! C h e e s e !! Gon' gobble me another piece. . .come back for more!! {Don't feel guilty; stealing a li'l taste was a compliment; Mama probably knew all along.} Thanks for the delicious snack. xOx 'Pea' xOx

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

I suppose it's never too late to confess, Bonnie. (LOL) I think your mom understands. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

I doubt if you ever really fooled your mother but she let you think so.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

I love it and iy was just the kind of things kids do. I would let it go if I were you Bonnie because it was probably a favorite story your mother loved to tell, at least I would have as a parent.

fee

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

I won't tell if you make me one or two...er, uh, maybe three...then I swear my lips will be sealed...Rufuz (oh & ed)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

Sad one today, Bonnie; very well written! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 9, 2009

Aww, this one is sad, Bonnie. We've all done things to make Momma cry. Well penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.