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Gone
by Mitzi Kay Jackson → (All Poetry by Mitzi Kay Jackson)
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Just finished reading, and watching the movie "There Eyes Were Watching God" third time reading the book first time watching the movie
enjoy





tiny drops of what life is or isn't


fall like seeds from a tree


and it blooms on my chest


planted like roots


and my eyes were watching God


moving cross the sky


with all the majesty of nature behind him


spreaded like butter


over hot water corn cakes knowing


like nature behind him


he don't know why worlds were stacked against him and I was just too young


the inside of him has turned on himself


the man he know himself to be


got left, put out for the killings


and he wants to fall over ships like his ancestors before


there he would be king


they got a place for him


this world wasn't meant to hold and bend under footsteps of Kings like himself


(member Jesus)


and it hurts


 I hurt like avalanche knowing


his hurt done built mountains in me


falling and erutping and burning like fire in me


these seed dropped and growed


these seeds spread and growed


den got burned down like crosses


like flags and


people at bar-b-ques


(member gypsies)


he knows i hold nature in my hands now


but he is out of reach


he knows i was just to young then


yet he dreams of Gods walking through sea weeds and the wedding of birds and bees


can taste my smell in words knowing the chances are very slim to none


if ever again


we would bathe in love


freshness of jasmine in your hands


my locks twisted round your fingers


still didn't know then


i was just to young to know then


that hell is no place for a God like you


where I can not follow


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 Reviews of "Gone"
Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on October 8, 2007
My dear friend, you never fail to strike chords of commonality in you readers...this is a gift you have and I am glad to see you share it here. This piece, like so many others of yours is vividly real, well composed and reads as if you were sitting across a table from us, the readers, sharing a moment of connection and peace.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
with the essence of Janie filtering your soul your heart has spoken its depths...

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on October 3, 2007
As always, Mitzi...your words seem to move me with your descriptions with twists and turns that mirror life in momentous ways.
Amor

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 1, 2007
A very interesting, spiritual and profound write. Your heart is filled with the love of God and your words express that well...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 1, 2007
Powerful offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Powerful revealing inner dialogue! "You were just too young then..." but what a story you MUST tell from your soul! I will definitely have to print this one, also to remember to see that DVD and maybe read the book-- I missed out there. You are ONE poet girl! Brave...

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Stunning Ms. Mitzi
Stay safe you hear me dear...
huggin....

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Such deep poingnacy in your words Mitzi! Your poetry never fails to move me, it is superb!

Love,
eileen

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Powerful words.. well written, love holly

Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Great write, Mitzi; well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
I am awed dear Mizi, this is a beautiful and totally stunning write that had me clinging to each line. I think it is your best and you have made an impacting statement that is hard to top.

hugs
FEe

Reviewed by Walter Jones
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
For man has no equal in emotion even God walked the earth to find joy, pain, and true sorrow, yet we are not able to walk in his path, but you write us there, special your gift.. Walt

Reviewed on September 29, 2007
Mitzi,

I love the way you write: you immediately involve the reader and make them FEEL the poem, BE the poem, LEARN the poem. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Glad to see you: miss you here!! Home ain't the same 'thout you.

Reviewed by Rene Remington
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
Hi Mitzi,

Boy could I feel the power and emotions behind this. Powerful wisdom


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