Painting Room (poem) by Mitzi Kay Jackson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Afrika Abney

Reviewed on October 6, 2002

What a lovely imaginative write.

Afrika M.A.Abney

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on September 9, 2002

ya know what i like about you? you can write like this.....

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2002

Wow!!! ~E

Reviewed by Nia Rose

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

This piece is quite nice, very imaginative.

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

such lyrical angst captured within the covers of verse...exceptional write! **Mari**

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

(((HUGS))) very emotional and intense...i agree with everyone here, excellent, brilliant, FANTASTIC!! :) (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) (i wish i felt the wind's cooling...it's HOT out dere!) :)

Reviewed by Timothy Foley (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

Fly Away Mitzi..I got my wings ready..let's blow 'dis joint.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

8-30-02

I would Rather Be Alone than be In Misery...

TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

Mitzi, I know you have done many marvelous works , but this one just captured me and has to be my favorite. Such imagery total excellence! Bravo!

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

Excellent images.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

Great write with great imageries and metaphors!!!!!

Mitzi, you have outdone yourself with this great write!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

This relationship feels like a prison. Great images.

Reviewed by Timothy writerwanted@hotmail.com

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

Great write! This shows the feeling of being used to one's convenience. No true love would do this! Get out and find a new romance. Tim

Reviewed by Timothy writerwanted@hotmail.com

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

strong imagery of despair...many wonderful lines in this one

Reviewed by R Kimberley (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

he walks away
putting the chain in place
he walks away with a smile on his face
and he puts me back on the shelf
....and then covers me
Incredibly heartfelt. Excruciatingly evoking.
A beautiful piece.
Thank you.

Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

Excellent poem here.
liquid starts to drown my tears
shadows leaving the walls
lions chasing deers
the sun is rising
I hear the owls calling ...BRILLIANT!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

Mitzi this is impressive, I can feel the pain and desperation in this. Excellent work. Expresses the attitude of the user and used so well. "and he puts me back on the shelf ....and then covers me" is one of the most descriptive and gut wrenching lines I've ever read.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

This felt like ghosts passing by,the feelings in it cold and errie,this poem is really good.

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2002

Excellent write Mitzi - very creative. Glad to read you again :) Loved these lines//

I hear the owls calling
all around me I see angels fallin