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My Eyes Won't Dry
by Mitzi Kay Jackson → (All Poetry by Mitzi Kay Jackson)
  
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Silence roar through my open window
and i cry and scream
i fall down on my belly
cause to breathe is killing me............
......"your a strong woman...you can handle it"
and yes i must admit
that one day i will walk out-of-space
that one day i will not make the same mistakes
that one day i will be all and more of what you see
.....but now while you leave
i will count and recount the falling of my tears
i will chase all my insecurities and fears
i will do all i can do to not let you free
i will give you me...like you've never seen
......but after all is said and done
......i will be the only one here

Queen of the night in all her glory
splinter punctures the thigh...and ends this story
cause you never cared for me i stood too tall
you couldn't do nothing for me i was adored by all
you felt useless at my side
but i......i need you so much
anything you want
baby just come.....one.....more.......time
baby just love me....one...more...time

i pour the wine
my eyes won't dry
i feel you behind me
lifting and twisting my direire
and my eyes won't dry
i feel you flow inside of me
i'm loving a shadow living in a dream
my eyes won't dry
your sliding from under my body
thought my thighs would hold you there
my eyes won't dry
fingers sliding my panties back in place
my pumps still in the air
my eyes won't dry
you kiss me on my back and say
goodbye
now that all is said and done
i am the only one here


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 Reviews of "My Eyes Won't Dry"
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Wow.. wonderful write. I can feel so many of your words, your truths. I am there. Have been there. So true, so deep.

Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Anwer Sher (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2003
i find your poetry intriguing and compellingly sensational.. bravo

Reviewed by Afrika Abney
Reviewed on November 22, 2002
Do not be in such pain Sis, it could be as good as you want it to be Sis.

Thanks for sharing this piece.

Afrika M.A.Abney

Reviewed by Victor Jensen
Reviewed on October 19, 2002
It's sad that love making can cause such pain when it should be so beautiful. Vic

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2002
Gave me chills. Very good. ~E

Reviewed on October 2, 2002
Hi Mitzi...fantastic write...nice to see you are still going strong. Missed your writes. Trish.

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on September 30, 2002
Mitzi: This is truly
beautiful....

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on September 28, 2002
Very moving and inspiring work. I would love to hear this one read out loud.

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on September 28, 2002
Mitzi:

Like a fragrant flower, your poetry is emerging with tremendous power.

The 5th line seems to describe you perfectly!
......"your a strong woman...you can handle it"


Reviewed by Timothy Foley (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2002
Powerful and outspoken, and of course as always, very sexy. I enjoyed reading it, you're tougher than some people might give you credit for.
Peace, Tim

Reviewed by Micha Julian
Reviewed on September 27, 2002
OH, GOD!
'i feel you flow inside me/i'm loving a shadow living in a dream/and my eys won't dry'/you reached into a sexual, honest/personal place and god, this..got to me, just hurt, inside...deep... as the woman you are/as the power of this sexual odyssey/love/pain...damn, oh..GOD...POWERFUL, WOMAN!
mitzi...you...i am just...breathless, like, w/pain...longing...aloneness, stunner!

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2002
Perfect! Please check out my port!

Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on September 26, 2002
very good...do i detect a flow change in this?as if you set a different mood with each stanza

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on September 26, 2002
mitzi this is amazing love this work. felt all the anguish and pain.
true art
josie

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2002
Great expression of longing and loneliness.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on September 26, 2002
This poem is a rhythmic sexual ride of painful longing! Darn good write!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on September 26, 2002
Sad deep emotion here Mitzi. You depicted the longing so well.

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on September 26, 2002
Excellent write.... love hurts!!!!

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2002
tumultuous emotion and passion...sexy, sexy stuff! **Mari**

Reviewed by m w
Reviewed on September 26, 2002
Mitzi, so much pain and sadness. I do hope this is not reflective of your life. Certainly your talent is thriving.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2002
Mitzi,
this was excellentso very good and loved the art work... i to became engrossed reading it...


Peg

Reviewed by Little Miss...
Reviewed on September 26, 2002
Mitzi...
Excellant....I was engrossed! :)
Take care,
Love Jilly x

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 26, 2002
Great emotion. I love the sadness here. Nice write.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 26, 2002
nice mix of sensuality and sadness...

Reviewed by Avatar 319 (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2002
Loving of a shadow,living in a dream!
Interesting,inspires a write. 2 bad u are the only 1 there.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on September 25, 2002
Excellent write Mitzi...sad and intense work.
Amor

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 25, 2002
Wow! Mitzi you are somthing else lady potent write

Reviewed by RON P KING
Reviewed on September 25, 2002
hey,hey,now very touching write,myheart hurts.

Reviewed by John Reilly (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2002
my pumps still in the air, sexy sad and now that it is said and done you are 1 tough broad


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