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He Said
by Mitzi Kay Jackson → (All Poetry by Mitzi Kay Jackson)
  
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My piece to add in the struggles of domestic voilence To Mrs. Linda Hill and others...with all the information there is still a long hard fight to come

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He Said.....


If I can't help you
I won't hurt you
If I can't help you
I'll leave you alone
I'll leave
you alone
you
alone....I won't hurt
you
I won't hurt you
I won't
hurt you
I'll leave
you...
I leave you alone
alone I
won't hurt you
I
won't
hurt
you
I
HURT...alone
you hurt you
I hurt damn it!
I
hurt you
Damn baby I'm sorry I hurt you
I never meant to hurt you
I'm sorry
never meant
to hurt you
sorry
you
sorry...stupid bitch
you stupid bitch
you can't be helped
you can't be
helped
no one can help you
no one
can help
you.......


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 Reviews of "He Said"
Reviewed by x x (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2007
Mitzi Kay you write with a lot of gut! Awesome! :-)

Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on November 11, 2003
power-ful!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 7, 2003
Poignant and powerful and unfortunately so true. Take care, Mitzi.

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)
Reviewed on November 6, 2003
Girl, it's a damn nice piece... Congrats...

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 6, 2003
powerful read

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on November 5, 2003
Oh my...this is strong....stark, raw emotion in single words or short bursts like punches and slaps...this is exceptional, Mitzi

Reviewed by Tova Gabrielle
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
Jesus, this is powerful. It's also how i tend to write sometimes, with the parsing of sentences. It makes me want to write one of my own. you must read my poem called- how to make a man-ok?

Reviewed by Dwayne Breeden (Reader)
Reviewed on October 5, 2003
Wow Mitzi! You and your messages are still intense! Keep up the hard work, each day it only gets better!
Dwayne

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 23, 2003
He Said She Said Now If Only Both Of You Would Do Something About It Instead Of (Cheap)Talk!

TRASK

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on September 23, 2003
the emotion here hit me, a haunting expression from "he said"

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on September 23, 2003
Powerful write...BHUWAN

Reviewed on September 22, 2003
Truly powerful write about a cycle that repeats itself time and time again. Lovely reading you again, my friend. Trish.

Reviewed on September 21, 2003
Powerful write indeed, Mitzi! I'm happy to see you here.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2003
Cha Ching Bling Bling...excellant and powerful delivery...Thank You Mitzi!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 21, 2003
Mitzi, only you can do it with such force and intensity, excellent write for the subject!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2003
Hits full force. Great write!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 21, 2003
Why is it women are attracted to abusive men, and then sucked into a cycle of abuse and violence? It must be genetic. Reasoning people wouldn't do it.

Reviewed on September 21, 2003
So Powerful, I felt every word, you said it all right here..

Reindeer

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on September 21, 2003
Sad situation. I don't know domestic violence - guess i was just lucky, but I have prayers for those who do!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2003
A common cycle. They love them, but then they hurt them.
Glad to read you again Mitzi...
Have a great day!

Reviewed on September 21, 2003
(((mitzi)))

*cringe* i felt the anger and betrayal in this strong, realistic, dramatic piece *tears*
powerful, powerful write--to anyone in this situation, GET OUT before it's too late

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :(


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