Slowly she walked up the hill
Head down, heart broken
She didn’t see the sun shining
The flowers were crushed beneath her feet
He had left her and she saw no tomorrow
No happiness or hope in her future
She reached the top of the hill and sat
Searching for a reason to go on
What happened on that hill, I can’t say
Was it a religious experience
Or a sudden awakening to hope
Who knows
But a different woman came back down that hill
She came down under a sun burning bright
Admiring flowers along the way
Birds chirped and bees buzzed
And she was alive with it all
He had left her yes, and taken a bit
Of her happiness
But her life was hers and only she could give it up
For today, she chose to live
And once chosen, life began anew
Her broken heart began to mend
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Reviews of "The Epiphany"
Reviewed by John Reilly (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2004
Good for her change is an important part of life
even when the change is for the worse and the lady
stinks good poem Susan
I enjoyed it
Sue, wonderful write. It sometimes takes separating ourselves, finding a place high above the pain, in order to see things as they truly are. Realizing that the only thing we can control in this life is ourself and our reactions to such things as heart aches, disappointments and heart breaks...
Anthony
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
GOOD FOR HER!
The rebirth exactly as needed, for those with broken hearts!
Re-Release! No longer back-listed. Return to the Olde Ways. The hustle and bustle of modern day life has brought many of us to a quick fix attitude.This book is for those of you who are fed up; have looked at your life and your loved ones and realize
even when the change is for the worse and the lady
stinks good poem Susan
I enjoyed it
awesome poem!
said better than this!
"But her life was hers and only she could give it up
For today, she chose to live
And once chosen, life began anew
Her broken heart began to mend."
Wonderful lines.
Anthony
The rebirth exactly as needed, for those with broken hearts!