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The Maiden Part 2
by Sue Hess → (All Poetry by Sue Hess)
  
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Gliding quietly, she slipped into his tent
Knowing he would sense her there
But trusting him to know she meant no harm
She quickly placed her hand over her mouth
Silencing his questions, she stared into his eyes
As she removed the deerskin shift she wore
Moving quickly, she stretched out along side him
The old women had told her what to do
But she knew at this moment that she needed no help
She captured his thigh between her legs
As she brushed his chest lightly with her nipples
Rubbing herself gently against his leg
She felt him rise against her stomach
But he lay as silent and still as he was
When she first entered the tent
He was leaving this to her and suddenly
She knew she would not disappoint him
She knew exactly what to do

To be continued

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 Reviews of "The Maiden Part 2"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
very intriguing...

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
Such wonderful imagery used, I could see the tale unfolding in my mind...Very VERY Good Work!
~Nikki~

Reviewed on October 29, 2003
Love this write, Sue; thanks for sharing! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. Will read part one now; stay tuned for a review on THAT! C ya soon! :D

Reviewed on October 29, 2003
(((sue)))

o, my...can't wait to read more

very excellently penned--well done

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
excellent beginning. you paint a very clear picture and being in her thoughts puts us firmly in her emotional state as well...looking forward to the continuation, poet.

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
Sue, you're doing well! You're doing REALLY well! ;)


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