Lost Tie (poem) by Phyllis Jean Green on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on November 16, 2005

Loved it! Brilliant use of metaphor.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on November 11, 2005

nice work,
relationships and weather, so alike they can be

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 11, 2005

Quite a powerful piece, Phyllis.

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on November 10, 2005

I love this poem It's so Unique! I love the way you tied love and weather together in this. Love can and often is so like the seasons. I really love this A lot! Fantastic poem!
Tracey42xoox(C :)

Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on November 10, 2005

good poem, hand in glove, layered, and wrapping around the mind warmly. k

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on November 10, 2005

Let's Hope Its Not The Mourning After-(Cry)Huh!

Unique N Different...

TRASK

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 10, 2005

You bring insight into the weather and how we are affected by the mishaps in life that chill our bones when they wear out.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 10, 2005

Got to be careful walking on slippery leaves.
Help a lady. Needs a new hip..

Love the discriptions... Last stanza says it all really.

temperature plummeted
before an unexpected front
dry enough to rattle
yet everything shrank........Happens to me in the cold weather too.:))

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 10, 2005

Again you have touched on the untouchable with grace and insight, the comparisons between weather an love is subtle but there all the same. Nice work Phyliss.

Felix

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on November 10, 2005

Thick with insulation, Pea! This is purely a warm cider write. Stick of cinnamon, nutmeg, and cloves. Full up to the rim and to be sipped slowly to absorb the comforting words. I'm going to stir this one around a bit if you don't mind, savor every word.

Sage

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 10, 2005

Almost like my moodswings.....lol!!

Thanks for sharing...now I feel better about the "bad weather" here!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Constance Gotsch

Reviewed on November 10, 2005

Sounds like Chicago's climate, or New Mexico's right now. Cold in the morning and evening warm during the day. Tough duty if you have to be outside all day

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 10, 2005

Yes one day warm the next cold. Twis the season. Great write.

Reviewed by Marcia Duning (Reader)

Reviewed on November 10, 2005

Very good, Pod