Soft Touch (poem) by Phyllis Jean Green on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on July 22, 2008

Yep. Watch out what you wish for. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on July 13, 2008

Sometimes people seek what they can't find..Good poem!........M

Reviewed by Gloria Gay

Reviewed on July 11, 2008

Wonderfully penned. A winner in a few words.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

Like the photograph, looking good- As the good book says, be careful what we wish for, it just might not be exactly what we want....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

Love the way these short cuts say so very much or at least feed the mind and imagination as to what may have transpired. Excellant picture as well.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Chris Wright

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

I think it shows that as much as men want to be hard azzes we aren't nothing but cookie dough and philsbury dough boys underneath the instantwe're lovingly touched by a woman. Great Piece!

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

One of the things I love about poetry is that it can have many meanings. Different people take away different things. Still, it disturbs me a little that this poem is being interpreted to mean something quite different than what I was thinking as I wrote it. To me, it is clear that the woman wanted -- or thought she wanted -- Mr. Perfect. Now she wishes she had stayed with gentle. Love instead of money and position. Not saying sex isn't important, or being in shape. Am saying -- trying to say -- that a lot of people look only at what is on the outside. . .and one day it is too late to change their minds. Oh, well. People seem to be getting a buzz. And that is a very good thing. Sweet dreams, Pea -- PS: Both the man and woman are
fictional characters!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

Some times you get what you wish for.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

Your poem expresses tenderness at its finest.I like reading this poem.take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

Succinctly passionate and expressive; well-done, Pea. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

Candle-ahhhhhh-bra...Jane Russell gams an' a velvet pinch of nostalgia-mind's-a-scr'pbook-where-does-time-go-waiter-bring-me-'nuther - an'-a-refill-too...Soft Touch pouring tender shadows of reminiscence with a lovely taste left upon our palates...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

Excellent, Phyllis, you managed to combine excitement with tenderness.
-gene.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

A great wish you have, hope he comes around and makes you very happy.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

Well, now, Pea - this one hot, hot, hot! Not the thing to read during a Texas heat wave - but then again, gives me a perfect excuse for a cold chower. LOL Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :D

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 10, 2008

Wow Phyllis I want someone who is sexy, someone buff someone tender, wait now my wish is filled.lol. Thank you for sharing a great write.

Newfie hugs, Rose