I love the line "to dream away sorrow, anger guilt." You said a lot just in those few words, let alone with all the others. You can pack more meaning in one word than most of us can put in a whole stanza. Awesome work you produce. Liz
Tantalizing, with palatable head rhyme. Also the first words of each stanza could be the springboard for another thought-process.
Morning cover after showering
Thankyou Pea
Richard
A wonderful write my friend. You give the reader much to think about with words of wisdom as I too agree that our tears do actually console us, help to heal, release, and revive us...well done indeed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Beautiful Morning To You Phyllis :)
Lovely Poem & Oddly Enough Our Tears Do Console Through The Wonderful Release Into Renewals Gifts
Much Love & Inspirations To You
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
The melancholy of these lines tugs at the heart with quiet sadness but the warm humanity that overflows with every line fills the soul with an appreciation for beauty. Thank you Gracious Poet Phyllis Jean Green,
In setting the spirit free there is a release that washes over us and revitalizes us, as a new beginning. This has the flow of perfection and a pleasure to read....
PERFECTION. What more can I say? Stunning imagery ("Long warm rain." "Sunlotioned hands." "Sleep as long as we want.") makes for a very comforting write - indeed. Feel like I've had a massage!! Your words are SOOOO relaxing. =]
My new favorite of yours (and Honey, you have a lot of favorites!).
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Morning cover after showering
Thankyou Pea
Richard
Hugs,
Sandie Angel :o)
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Lovely Poem & Oddly Enough Our Tears Do Console Through The Wonderful Release Into Renewals Gifts
Much Love & Inspirations To You
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Aberjhani
for this enjoyable write
Love & peace be with you
William
Be always safe,
Karen
Lovely ending.
Axilea
May they come for you!
dream away sorrow,anger, and guilt." What a wonderful thought
hugs
fee
PERFECTION. What more can I say? Stunning imagery ("Long warm rain." "Sunlotioned hands." "Sleep as long as we want.") makes for a very comforting write - indeed. Feel like I've had a massage!! Your words are SOOOO relaxing. =]
My new favorite of yours (and Honey, you have a lot of favorites!).
(((((HUGS))))) and love from Texas way, Karla.
The poem beautifully done.
-gene.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D