Jokes my way blown smoked my brain,
Backward editor to mentally lame lost,
Rapier wits endangered my blind eyes,
Gun to your head on pedestal it will cost.
Tourniquet twisted too tight Eddies,
Flame my suffering bouncing Betties,
Celebrated fool throw your confettis,
Cutting like darkest night's machetes.
Anger slaps your fat old gray two-faces,
Laughing hardily around the Den's places,
Band-aided poetry and stories LSD laces,
Mr. Shakespeare and Homer left no traces.
If I could strangle your neck with a garrote,
Give I your liver to birds of prey to eat fatly,
No mock apology feigns you spitting parrot,
Death give I no pretense via this poem flatly.
Then other verse, you dump it! and it's felt deeply!
J'nia my friend too, said it PERFECTLY what I would have said to YOU!
Walk and tread lightly, so as you do, you can sense their real self coming through!
Sorry this happens to you!
YOU have such talent and thought provoking verses are a talent!
Warmest Blessings Love and Hugs, Purple Lady Passion, SHEExooo
YOUR Bio pict. YOU look so Sad, STARMaN! and A STARMAN should be Happy! LET THE POSITIVE Within Show! Shine your light, you know... :)I want to see that lasting glow, like it your writing flows! that I have happily come to know!
"Love one another" - is the 1st commandment and the others will follow.
Yours in Christ,
JMD
Regis
Be always safe,
Karen
I think this expresses well the hurt you still feel. This is exactly why we should always treat others the way we would like to be treated. What ever happened to that saying, anyway? Stay strong~
Sheila
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
That's telling those that have nothing better to do than spread hate and discontent through flaming OFF (and in rhyme, yet). Well done! Too much of that going on, and the sad part is, they hide behind a persona they want to be, not revealing their true name or having any titles to their name. Wrote about this, myself, under "Magnificent Carnac," when another poet was attacked for no reason. There's constructive criticism and then there's blatant attacks. No call for it! We're family here, ya know? Attack one, all are attacked.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.