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Approaching Empty
by Lloyd Lofthouse → (All Poetry by Lloyd Lofthouse)
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Seperated by several thousand miles.

Jetlag sets your mind to zero.

You wake in the dark;
Reach to touch her leg
To discover
You are in a
House of lonely rooms.

I think of places we shared:
The Summer Palace;
That hill next to the Forbidden City
Where the last Ming emperor hung himself;
The Great Wall;
Thousands of warriors made of clay near Xian;
Misty Hangchow
With its lake filled with lotus
Surrounded by weeping trees.
The streets of Shanghai
Crowded with a billion people.

We held hands;
Risked our lives crossing streets
Belonging to taxis
That charge by the yuan.

Now, the only sounds I wake to
Are jets flying to LAX
Thirty miles away
Reminding me no one is
In this misty-eyed Los Angeles house
To sing and dance in the mornings.

A neighbor says
Someone is breaking into houses.
I think of my father’s gun
With bullets that explode on impact

After reading
The Last Hours of Ancient Sunlight,
The second hand on the clock
Crawls through a desolate wasteland.

I don’t fit in this house
When my one-of-a-kind Empress isn’t home.

In China soft rain falls on her hair.
Dew Clings.
The garden needs water.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Approaching Empty"
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on July 4, 2008
YOu must have had great experiences while in service. This is a good descriptive write and pleasing to read.

Reviewed on June 29, 2008
I see delicate passions of love & feel her beauty in your poetic display of yearning
very lovely write Lloyd
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on June 22, 2008
Lloyd - Enjoy your use of imagery. I've always been fascinated by China, especially the ancient Chinese poets. Thanks for the journey. Especially liked the closing lines:

In China soft rain falls on her hair.
Dew Clings.
The garden needs water.

That last line has a resonance of meaning, beyond the literal. - David

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 16, 2008
Interesting and a sense of much truth, well said....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on June 16, 2008
Many fantastic images to enjoy in this writing...I sense a sincere love in this piece but also a longing also. This is truly an interesting and profound writing.

Reviewed on June 16, 2008
Well written, Lloyd. I love the imagery this piece brings.

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on June 16, 2008
I can feel where you are in this marvelous poem. The line I used
in something I wrote not too long ago was: House of empty rooms.
Great minds, huh? He said with a smile. You took me to the land
I always wanted to see, and hoped to see when I was in the Pacific those many years ago, but the typhoon chased us the other way.
Thanks for this. - gene.


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