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Until You Touched Me....
by Linda M Hill → (All Poetry by Linda M Hill)
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You were always my hero
I looked up to you
When I had a problem
You would help me through
A leader in our church
Well admired in our town
No greater Christian man
Could ever be found
I put you on a pedestal
As high as I could see
I thought you hung the moon
...until you touched me

You were there to lean on
Whenever I was sad
The best Sunday School teacher
That I ever had
You were always first in line
To guide your fellowman
To give your heart and soul
Lend a helping hand
I thought you were my friend
But that was not to be
I had great respect for you
...until you touched me







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 Reviews of "Until You Touched Me...."
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 16, 2005
You express well the magnitude of this dilemma, Linda. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on March 7, 2005
Oh my, how I can relate to this. I spent 1.5 years of my teens believing that our youth pastor was in love with me...a married man with three kids. Until I found out that he was trying to feel up every other 12-14 year old girl in our group. Where do these people come from? Bless you Linda. I can feel your pain in this write. Truly I can. Michelle

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on March 7, 2005
not the man his words
all those things are what God is for
enjoyed your poem felt it deeply
reserve those praises for Him^
sad

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2005
A sad thing, Linda that happens most every where. Unfortunate and can only be stopped by strong action. You always think of the downtrodden and the helpless.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed on March 4, 2005
Linda,

A bullet to the heart--shattering! *tears*

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed on March 4, 2005
heartbreaking!! why do people have to be so stupid to do this to an innocent litle child?? it's WRONG, and it needs to be stopped...NOW! well done!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 4, 2005
Auch !! Eina!! Dammit!!

Shows you one thing.... you cannot trust no one!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2005
Powerful words here as only you can write them Linda. I admire so much how you put this out there. I admire your voice for children. Thank you.

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on March 4, 2005
Ouch Linda! You're written this so well, dealing with such a sensitive issue with style. You sure got your point across. How often it is the ones we trust that betray it?
Fantastic write!
Chanti

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 3, 2005
It is pandemic, this is so sad, but powerful.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on March 3, 2005
Inspiration More Like Aspiration Done Did Really On Your Own Mind--You Already Knew That All Time!

Neat For You Ill For Him/Them,i.e. When It Comes To True Friends-Respect-Admiration,It's All In How You Say It Not Do It (Acquaintences)So-Called Friends_

Only As How You Show Compassion What Is True Love Really Is...

Your True Friend,TRASK

Reviewed on March 3, 2005
Well said with a gracefull heart

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on March 3, 2005
Wonderful write!

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on March 3, 2005
Heart breaking, but only broken hearts get the job done.
You are such an angel.
John

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on March 3, 2005
this is perfect, it doesn't belabor the point, just says what needs to be said

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 3, 2005
Since the surge in media proliferation in the world, and especially in America, I have to say that I was and still am shocked at the amount of child moslestation that is reported and is happening. It is an epidemic and one that should be tended to harshly and decisively, but all too often the uncles, the daddys and the Sunday School Teacher is not punished in the way that they should. This poem id strong. And good. Strong and Good.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 3, 2005
Dear Linda thia is truly a compelling and heart breaking poem. The loss of trust by a youngster for an adult is a real crime against children that is almost as hateful as the actual molestation. You have brought this home very sharply in this write, too bad molesters aren't forced to read these poems daily while serving their sentences.

Hugs,

Felix


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