In this vast world we live in
Will we ever know
Is it fate or destiny
That holds us in its flow
Do the stars tell us how to act
Control the way we feel
Are we just puppets on a string
Not realizing what is real
In this vast world we live in
Will we ever know
The mysteries of life and death
Are what they will bestow
Is there a Heaven and a Hell
Are do we create our own
If life comes with instructions
Why aren't we ever shown
In this vast world we live in
Will we ever know
The magic of the universe
Or how the stars glow
Are the chapters of our lives
Already written down
Is there nothing we can do
To turn it all around
Does happiness and pain
Lay in our own hand
Is life of our own making
Help me to understand
The border between myth and history isn't as shapr as officially approved, self appointed science wants us to believe. In our past beyond (further back in time) the records common (wo)man is allowed to study and build his / her views on, lie hidden truths that give us a more accurate account of how we came to be, who we really are and what future may have in store for us (which is impossible to do with the information generally past on). A good starting point you may find here: http://www.ancienttexts.org/library/mesopotamian/index.html
Gather keywords and expand your exploration. You will be amazed. Take care,
Love sometimes take a long time to find us but when you have sufferd enough you take on love with a gentle long waited well fitted glove. beautiful work.
Direct and sincere prayer can make the difference in our Destiny..
Almighty God is always ready to receive our prayers, and act accordingly
Beautiful poetry
Though you don't post often when you do it is well worth waiting for my friend. This poem looks at the world and questions the validity of what we are taught by church and state and says "What if?". It asks the questions some are afraid to ask and leaves the reader thinking which is what a great philosphy Poem should.
Fee
I know that we cannot change the past; but the future is still waiting for us to create and learn.
A thought-provoking write, Linda! Welcome back!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by ceegeeess -- (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2006
The universe we live in is always churning our minds about the life and death and the other world after death and rebirth. creation and recreation are very much done by us and the brooding about after death lands us no where. Nice write dear Linda!
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2006
Powerful and thought provoking piece.
"
Does happiness and pain
Lay in our own hand
Is life of our own making
Help me to understand
"
There Is No Secret To Life
You Deceive It-Strife
You Humble It-Strife
You Respect It-Life
It Will Be Good To You...
c 2006 TRASK...
You See Linda It Takes Into Account True Friendship Is Good Part Of We Share As I We Have And Those Few Others Here Who Respect Me & You At Authorsden...
Your True Friend, TRASK
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2006
Long time no read Linda Hill..
Stunning wrtite Linda..
I believe man has created many of
these heaven and hells.
Hard to understand it all.
I keep having faith.
Thanks for this treasure my friend always.
Hearts of Gold
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Portland, Oregon is known as the City of Roses. Of course that’s an odd name for a city whose mere mention conjures images of driving winds and torrential ra
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Hearts of Gold
Synopsis
by
Frank P. Whyte
Portland, Oregon is known as the City of Roses. Of course that’s an odd name for a city whose mere mention conjures images of driving winds and torrential ra
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Gather keywords and expand your exploration. You will be amazed. Take care,
RAge
God Bless
Michelle~
enjoyed much
thanks for sharing
Love & Peace
William
Direct and sincere prayer can make the difference in our Destiny..
Almighty God is always ready to receive our prayers, and act accordingly
Beautiful poetry
Blessings
Peter
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Fee
superbly crafted poem with a highly developed portanse of conjecture ...
A thought-provoking write, Linda! Welcome back!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
"
Does happiness and pain
Lay in our own hand
Is life of our own making
Help me to understand
"
WISH I WROTE THIS
good to read you again
a keeper
I honestly love this
great rhyme question and subject matter
you had my attention from line one
pax A
cherish it always! Thank you! I have
missed you as well!
I am back for a little bit as well.
Love Ya~!
Becca
I Wrote In Just Previous Write:
There Is No Secret To Life
You Deceive It-Strife
You Humble It-Strife
You Respect It-Life
It Will Be Good To You...
c 2006 TRASK...
You See Linda It Takes Into Account True Friendship Is Good Part Of We Share As I We Have And Those Few Others Here Who Respect Me & You At Authorsden...
Your True Friend, TRASK
Stunning wrtite Linda..
I believe man has created many of
these heaven and hells.
Hard to understand it all.
I keep having faith.
Thanks for this treasure my friend always.