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Sands Through The Hourglass
by Linda M Hill → (All Poetry by Linda M Hill)
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Man lying in the street
Bottle by his side
Kids in another state
His wife has died
Numbing his pain in a
Bottle of liquid fire
Finding out whiskey
Is nothing but a liar
Tears come as he pours
The whiskey down
Pain still there
Coldness surrounds

Clocks tick on...as sands from an Hourglass....
Giving out of time.....going too Fast.....

Little girl on her bed
Tears on her face
She feels like she don't
Belong anyplace
Daddys at the bar again
She wished he'd stay
She can't bear his rage
For another day
Bruises on her body
Sore and alone
No one to protect her
Since her Mommy's gone

Clock ticks on...as sands from and Hourglass...
Giving out of time...Going too
Fast...

Man holding a gun
World spinning around
His wife walked out
Living somewhere downtown
Deafening silence
Can't take anymore
His life ended when she
Walked out the door
Darkness engulfing him
Like the claws of death
Waiting like a vulture
For his last breath

Clock ticks on...as sands from and Hourglass....
Giving out of time......going to
Fast...


© Linda Hill 2003
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 Reviews of "Sands Through The Hourglass"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 22, 2007
These are sad glimpses into the daily tragedies in this world. Thank you, Linda. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on June 21, 2007

Reviewed by Theresa curnow (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
Powerfuly written peice of work and very sad and true as well. Poignant write Linda, love Theresa.

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
Humanity seems to court tragedy as innocent victims suffer the consequences of mistakes made by others, as time slips by, without any concern. Reality can be so sad and painful when love and commitment go out the window because we succomb to our human weaknesses. A timely and well written piece...
~Butch Howard

Reviewed on June 19, 2007
Linda your heart is on the pulse of humanity. Heart touching and powerful write.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
You always seem to pin down the realities in life experienced by so many people in their tragedies and struggles. Sadly they cannot cope and turn to either the bottle or drugs & neglect themselves and others in their lives. Beautifully done, Linda
Amor

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
What a powerful write my friend...full of sadness that unfortunatly fills our nation today. So many family's are torn apart by alcohol and drugs. I see it more each year within our children at school, as time goes by little lives are being destroyed by adults whom don't know where to turn for help, other than a bottle, needle, or pill. Sad, but true. Powerful write, the repetition only instills the urgency for help that is so desperately needed...outstanding offering my friend, touched my heart...I think we all have someone within our family somewhere who has felt the cruel hand of abuse due to alcohol or drugs...my husband and I both have extended family members who have and continue to suffer, all we can do is pray for the Lord to intervene before it's too late as it has been for others in the past. Very moving, indeed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
Sadly written
Another innocent victim
The world takes
When vows forsake.
DWB

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
Linda,

Each grain is a soul in despair. Expertly done my friend. Bless You Always, Paul.

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
Only the names and faces change the sands will continue. good write. lady J

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
STunning and sadly so close to the reality of day to day life that it sends shivers down the spine.
Fee

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
soulful passionate write, Linda

Walt

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
life's unfortunate events pushing people to the extremes ... and time couldn't care less ... happens to every generation ...

well penned, Linda ...

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
Linda,
This is good and touched a nerve. I lived in a bottle for years and found that the pain, sorrow, grief and everything else forlorn was still there. Alcohol is cunning, baffling and powerful, just waiting to pounce. Great job of writing!

George

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 16, 2007
The flowing tides of a life in a world filled with disillusionment, enjoyed.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on June 16, 2007
wow Linda..this was really great. I could feel the evershifting sands of time in these powerful words...

Allen

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on June 16, 2007
Like VORTEX Humanity Isn't Running Out Of Time-

It Ran Out Of Time...Humanity Is Simply Caught Up In Its Own Inequities-

SELF CENTERED $ GREED...

Your True Friend,TRASK

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 16, 2007
Powerful offering Linda!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on June 16, 2007
powerful write here Linda and yes, it has to be one of your best. cheers and thanks a million for sharing it, however sad.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on June 16, 2007
This poem really has emotional depth. A great write. It is sad that so many people in the world use that old whiskey bottle like a pleasure ride into hell.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 16, 2007
A sad but realistic tale of life...well written.

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2007
One of your best my friend. I can relate to this poem.

Reviewed on June 16, 2007
Heartbreaking verse, Linda; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed on June 16, 2007
Excellent, heartbreaking lines of sadness, excellently penned. Well done, Linda!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2007
This is a magnificient piece Linda!!
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on June 16, 2007
To share thoughts from truly tested waters -Brings hope for a new wave to carry us and show - Changes of currents finds your hour-glass not viewed so slow- {Ted Bossis}


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