Pain (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on January 2, 2009

Linda~!

Great image . . . terrific poem - you are so good!!

LOve and Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Drkman (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

Linda this is a great write. Emotions familiar to so many of us pour from every word. Great work.
Drkman

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 31, 2002

powerful write!! you will be in my prayers!! love in christ jesus, your friend, karen lynn in texas.

Reviewed by Scada (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

I never know the right words to say to someone who's hurting. Be well.

Scada

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

pain will go and the sun will shine
and Linda in that time
strengthen your heart, your mind body and soul, for the next time it try to come walking through your door.....
so you can just close it and walk away
peace be with you!!
enjoyed your write!!

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

peace to you
josie

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

You asked these questions
"Where will it end - the pain that I feel?
Am I destined to hurt - to never heal?

There is an end although the pain is real
it is inevitable that in time will reveal
the counsel of those who are first a friend
and the realization that the heart will mend
Amor

Reviewed by Joe

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

Please look at the WFN again your answer is there!--God Bless!--Excellent write!

Reviewed by Tomas Ughdair (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

Hi Linda.
Lot of painful expression,nicely constructed with a good flow.
Morchuis

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

Look inside your heart. You are never alone.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

Linda this made me very sad,You are a lot deeper than I first thought...why are you so sad,what is causing the pain?Find the reason and get away from it,there is always a reason deep down,talk about it and get it out.Keep writing it helps.
Love from,
Kay. hugs.

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

Excellent write...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

Linda:

This is most heartfelt and sad. I really feel for you. Hope everything will work out for you soon. You are not alone, we are all here for you in the den.

((((( Love and Hugs )))))

Sandie Angel :o)

P.S. Great moving write!!!!!

Reviewed by Sanilnath

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

WOW LOVELY WRITE LINDA ... PAIN ... ALL DO HAVE PAIN IN THEIR LIFE IN ONE WAY OR OTHER. THE PAIN CAUSED BY OUR DEAR ONES AND OUR PERSONAL PROBLEMS ARE THE MOST DRASTIC ONES. IT HURT OUR HEART AND IT FINALLY LEADS TO HEALTH PROBLEMS AND MENTAL STRESS. SUCH PAINS MUST ALWAYS BE SOLVED WITH SMILE AND BETTER THINKING. U MUST SOLVE SUCH PROBLEMS FIRST TO MAKE URSELF HAPPY. I ALWAYS BELIEVED IN UR INNER STRENGTH. I ALWAYS BELIEVE YOU CAN ALWAYS SOLVE THE PROBLEMS BY URSELF. I'M SURE YOU WILL FIND HAPPINESS SOON.

I BELIEVE A LOVELY FAMILY IS THE STRENGTH OF A PERSON AND U REALLY HAVE ONE. WISH YOU ALL THE BEST .. SOLVE THE PROBLEMS AND KEEP URSELF ALWAYS HAPPY ... KEEP SMILING MY LOVELY FRIEND ..

WITH REGARDS
saniLnath

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2002

Once upon a time love came knocking on your door, but you told it don't come back any more. Once upon a time he made your heart sing, but you said I can't wear your ring. Once upon a time you were crazy in love; then tears started falling from the sky above. Once upon a time you had your chance for unending romance, but you turned away and lived inside a prison fence. Now all your days are the same, and tomorrow you'll still be playing this funny game. Once upon a time ... once upon a time ... once upon a time when you were mine. Love Bill xxoxoxo

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2002

Namaste dear Linda;

I just want you to know hun. You are never alone.. This is an excellent write. (( hugs ))

Love and Light and hope
dreamweaver

Reviewed by D. Enise

Reviewed on July 9, 2002

Oh Linda! I could feel your sorrow in this write! Please know that the pain "will" end.
And with it's end, you will find yourself stronger, and brighter just as each new day of the suns rising.
I send you my prayers, thoughts and light for healing.
And a hug!
I know the place your in, just keep looking for the light, it "is" there. Inside of you.
*HUGS*
~Jen

Reviewed by Chris Stevens (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2002

a powerful... yet so sad write!!!!!!... well done!!!
hugs,
Chris

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 9, 2002

Like everything else you sure know how pain feels...so do I..deeply felt write..

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 9, 2002

All the tomorrows are bright and new
Hold His hand, He'll walk with you