My Heart Won't Listen (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2002

god, Linda.. this is me too! what a coooool way to express a familiar battle. One touch one kiss and I become one BIG heart! all smiles and no brain.. ahhhhhhhh.. to be loved, or at least completely charmed. (sigh). lovely, clever write. katy. (smile).

Reviewed by Katharine Clifford

Reviewed on August 26, 2002

This is the rate I had meant to give you. So very sorry! I know you understand I am just really upset with myself that this has happened.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on August 25, 2002

powerful

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 25, 2002

Ah!..... You have described that feeling of being in love so well. Nice write Linda!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 25, 2002

oh, this is so good!! i absolutely loved it!! love, and ((HUGS)), your friend, karen lynn. god bless!!

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on August 25, 2002

The conversational tone of this poem just drew me in, Linda. I like how you and your heart are so honest with each other, yet neither is willing to give an inch. Perhaps other people with head and heart conflicts can use your poem as a guide to ease their own turmoil. I like this one a lot. :)

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on August 25, 2002

Linda, a really lovely read this that says what we all felt/feel sometime or another...follow your head as well as your heart, and if the two are on the same wavelenght...well...great write a pleasure to read...take care...Mark xx

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 25, 2002

Outstanding!! Wonderful image of the conversation and flows beautifully with real emotion.

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on August 25, 2002

well written poetry. excellent flow.

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on August 25, 2002

Wonderful write my dear friend ... wonderful write ... Keep it up ... You always come up with something different. You are so good at heart ... You are so good at ur thoughts and You are excellent in ur writings ...

Keep it up my dear friend ... Keep it up ... Wish u all happiness and all smiles :D :D ... ha ha ha :D ....

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 24, 2002

wish you happiness...

Reviewed by Timothy writerwanted@hotmail.com

Reviewed on August 24, 2002

The heart such a fickle creature. Very well done. Descriptive and vivid imagery. Tim

Reviewed by Sailor Neptune (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2002

Excellent write can really feel the emotions in this write.