Shadows dancing
on the wall
Faucet dripping
down the hall.
Wonder what I'm
living for
Just so I can hurt
some more?
Can't stop the pain
even if I try
Would it stop
if I die?
Shadows dancing
darkness looms
I'm powerless against
the gloom.
I feel so lost...just
and empty shell
Looking at me , you
could never tell.
Beyond tears I sit
here alone
While that ole clock
keeps ticking on.
Shadows dancing
but I don't see
No one cares at
all for me.
My soul screams in
anquish and pain
My jumbled mind is
going insane.
Darkness covers me
My demons come near
In silence I cry
Won't someone hear?
hope you are not feeling this way. i am, though. it is hard to be joyful when i have to work on christmas day (found out last week, and i have been very depressed since), and it is hard to be joyful when i feel so alone! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS)))
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2002
Linda "
Shadows dancing
on the wall
Faucet dripping
down the hall.
Wonder what I'm
living for
Just so I can hurt
some more?
Can't stop the pain
even if I try
Would it stop
if I die? "
Yopu are the hearalder for all that are hurt.....Never forget it..
Smiles Lady Peg
HAPPY HOLIDAYS DEAR ONE>>
PEG
Reviewed by Drkman (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2002
and you said to me you could never write dark poetry. Now who is standing here amazed at someones talent. Drkman
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2002
Shadows Dancing ...
Wonderful Lines ... Wonderful Feeling ... You Capture Others Heart So Well ... You Give Out Complete Imagination ... You Make Your Write So Strong With Wordings. ...
Would It Stop If I Die ???? ... God Gave Us Life For Doing Something Important ... I Belive, We Are Not The Owner Of Our Life ... He Who Gave Us This Beautiful Life Is The Complete Owner. He Is The Person Who Can Take Our Life. Thinking Of Death Is Really Bad Thought.
Wonderful Write ...
Take Care of ur Health.
Reviewed by Beth Hietala (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2002
Beautifully written though sad, a feeling I could kind of relate to before I met my husband.
Very well written, Linda. I am sure it is merely a fantastic piece of poetry from you and not factual. You just have a way of exploring the feelings of others so much that it becomes commonplace with you to write so credibly.
Amor
Reviewed by Allen Filius (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2002
Linda, what an emotional write, so very well expressed! so sad and powerful how you describe this feeling of loneliness.
Beautiful poem , but I hope you are not, feeling that way, I wrote something to that effect, but it was only poetry, I'll soon post it.
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Shadows dancing
on the wall
Faucet dripping
down the hall.
Wonder what I'm
living for
Just so I can hurt
some more?
Can't stop the pain
even if I try
Would it stop
if I die? "
Yopu are the hearalder for all that are hurt.....Never forget it..
Smiles Lady Peg
HAPPY HOLIDAYS DEAR ONE>>
PEG
Wonderful Lines ... Wonderful Feeling ... You Capture Others Heart So Well ... You Give Out Complete Imagination ... You Make Your Write So Strong With Wordings. ...
Would It Stop If I Die ???? ... God Gave Us Life For Doing Something Important ... I Belive, We Are Not The Owner Of Our Life ... He Who Gave Us This Beautiful Life Is The Complete Owner. He Is The Person Who Can Take Our Life. Thinking Of Death Is Really Bad Thought.
Wonderful Write ...
Take Care of ur Health.
Wishing you Happy Holidays,
Beth
Amor
(((((Hugs)))))
Allen
Happy Holidays,
William Bonilla