No light in this tunnel of
Dark despair
Only sadness of knowing
No one is there
Heartache and pain
That won't go away
Depression sits in for
Another day
In my prison without bars....
Silence deafening within
These four walls
Unbearable pain as each
Teardrop falls
How could I believe that
He wanted me
Some things are just not
Meant to be
Oh linda, I wish you love and happiness. I am very sad cause you are sad. Bill
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
I know this prison I stuggle with it everyday and it not easy but to have friends helps a lot and I a friend you can turn to
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
Wonderful Write Linda M Hill,
I dont know you wrote this with Headache or pain. Still if this write is not a fiction then let me tell u ... never be sad or never be worried. You keep smiling all day and all nite. Think of the lovely height you can reach and what you always dreamt for ...
Wish you always keep smiling and wish u always have wonderful days.
great write, linda! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) believe me, i know what depression is like; it is definitely like a prison without bars; not a fun place to be, i can guarantee you! :(
The prisons without walls are the hardest to escape.. but you can.. You have written this with emotion that has the power to take us into your prison.. GREAT WRITE
Reviewed by Sharon Williamson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
Whew this one is familiar...not the poem but the vibe.
Well done,
Sharon;)
Married ten years, and more in love than ever, Robert and Marcie have everything to live for. But a terrible secret is breaking Robert's heart: he knows that Marcie is about to die...
Five years have passed. The sequel to the award-winning Chapel of Eternal Love, this book revisits the same couples in the first book, and where the lives have taken them since they left the altar at The Chapel of Eternal Love
I dont know you wrote this with Headache or pain. Still if this write is not a fiction then let me tell u ... never be sad or never be worried. You keep smiling all day and all nite. Think of the lovely height you can reach and what you always dreamt for ...
Wish you always keep smiling and wish u always have wonderful days.
God Bless you Linda
Sanilnath
Jack
Beautifully sad,
Reindeer
Love from India - Joel -
Well done,
Sharon;)