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Prison Without Bars
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No light in this tunnel of
Dark despair
Only sadness of knowing
No one is there
Heartache and pain
That won't go away
Depression sits in for
Another day

In my prison without bars....

Silence deafening within
These four walls
Unbearable pain as each
Teardrop falls
How could I believe that
He wanted me
Some things are just not
Meant to be

In my prison without bars....

© Linda Hill 2003


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 Reviews of "Prison Without Bars"
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
Oh linda, I wish you love and happiness. I am very sad cause you are sad. Bill

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
I know this prison I stuggle with it everyday and it not easy but to have friends helps a lot and I a friend you can turn to

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
Wonderful Write Linda M Hill,
I dont know you wrote this with Headache or pain. Still if this write is not a fiction then let me tell u ... never be sad or never be worried. You keep smiling all day and all nite. Think of the lovely height you can reach and what you always dreamt for ...
Wish you always keep smiling and wish u always have wonderful days.

God Bless you Linda

Sanilnath

Reviewed by Zokhruf Ahmad (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
sigh......how true!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
Such a sad write. Well done Linda.
Jack

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
Linda, very well written.

Reviewed on April 8, 2003
great write, linda! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) believe me, i know what depression is like; it is definitely like a prison without bars; not a fun place to be, i can guarantee you! :(

Reviewed on April 8, 2003
You write so well of that darkness that dwells in so many of us, This one touched me deeply,

Beautifully sad,

Reindeer

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
Great write of dark emotion.

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
Very emotional and so sad, Linda

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
Linda, I like the style and structure of this. At least, in this type of prison, we do have the power to eventually free ourselves. ~Joseph

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
I must confess.... been in that kind of a jail before ;)....a few times. Loved the emotion Peg! Teresa

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
Powerplay on words.

Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
Deeply emotional write..raw, open, vulnerable and honest. {{{{{{Hugs}}}}}

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
Uh huh.....I've been in that jail once or twice.....Great heartfelt write! ...Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
The prisons without walls are the hardest to escape.. but you can.. You have written this with emotion that has the power to take us into your prison.. GREAT WRITE

Reviewed by Sharon Williamson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
Whew this one is familiar...not the poem but the vibe.
Well done,
Sharon;)


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