When I Take My Last Breath (poem) by Linda M Hill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

Oh I think the Angels already know all about you Linda. Lovely write

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

i'm sure you will be much celebrated! an excellent introspective, poetic exercise ...

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

This poem touched my heart wonderful Lady. And I will always have fond memories of you. You write masterfully! Your friend Bill

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

wonderful write.

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

very thought provoking..enjoyed this, best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

Beautiful poem from a beautiful soul who has touched so many of us with her spirit and love.

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on January 29, 2004

I think it is safe to say you are in the unforgettable catagory.
:)
John

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

While we all might hope to leave a legacy behind, when we're gone, it doesn't much matter. What matters is that we live in the here and now - making differences in the lives of those we touch every, single day. I have no doubt that you will be remembered for the living angel you are, Linda.

Hugs,
Tami

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

Once You Are Dead HUMANITY COLD CARE LESS_

Your Last Breathe In This World Irrelevant As In Eye's of (God) There Is No AIR, Only Place In His Mind Where My Hand(s) Of My Little Children Reach It To You_ In Blink Of Your Eye_

When They Tell You To Run With Them Do Not Look Back Ever Again_

In The Light . End Of Tunnel You Will See (Meet) Me,TRASK (Millions Of Little Children Waiting To Hug You)- Never Smile On My Face Not a Word Said Only (God)'s Tear's As They Now Come Down My Face Awaiting Your My Hug Welcome Into Kingdom Of (God)!

Your Friend, TRASK

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

This Dear Linda, is outstanding...awesome in every way...and yes...I know for a fact, when your time does come, you will be remembered for your kind heart and the words you say.
Allen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

Awesome write, Linda!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

Stunning write Linda!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

Every word you read is the
Heart and soul of me

With poems like these, you will be remembered!

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

Very touching write friend..Great thoughts!