It's a beautiful place
Here at old Phyllis Lake
And it brings back
Some long time ago's
And Lord we both know
That wherever I go
I can sure use
A whole bunch of those
It's old memories
That now are important
Just like ballst's
A must on a ship
Or you'll capsize and drown
In deep water
As you travel on
Life's stormy trip
I look back among
Those old memories
And wonder just what
Went all wrong
With the dreams
And the schemes
That propelled me
To where only old memories
Are strong!
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Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
I'm with Chrissie on this one. I knew if you were a friend of Vic's, you'd be worth checking out! :)
Thanks for the memories.
Thanks for the memories.
and brings back some great memories as well.
lovely write! keep it up!
=Hugs= ~*~CJ~*~
Enjoyed your reference to the ship!!!
Great Poem!!!
Bonnie
Lovely,
Reindeer
Chrissie
Enjoyed it.
~E
Nive sentimental write