The sincere unsaid. (poem) by Kay P M- Devenish on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2006

To love is to dare and sometimes we give more and never fair. This holds sadness and is so well written. Thanks for visiting and encouraging me on my work.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on December 28, 2005

Stark bittersweetness... Very well penned indeed, Kay.
Peace to you and yours,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 17, 2005

The sadness within these verses echoes along the walls of my soul. You touch on a universal theme, Kay. Thank you. Love, peace, strength, and healing to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on December 16, 2005

Dear Kay,

So nice to read you again. Hopefully, you've released your pain in this write and can now move on toward happier days.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 14, 2005

A truly sad piece, Kay; but also truly nice to be reading you again.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 13, 2005

Deep sadness in this one Kay!!

Warm hugs & Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kristian Mahrling-Harding

Reviewed on December 13, 2005

my dearest freind, how long it's been..and to come back to read such heart ache from you..(((((hugs)))). but the way you write..delivering your words is still amazing to me..even after all these years since YP.
it's been too long, and i've missed you. my best wishes for you and yours.
hugs always
krissy

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on December 13, 2005

well said well read
despie spite we write
wellllllllllllllll
just me
TX

Reviewed by Dan Rains (Reader)

Reviewed on December 12, 2005

Beautiful write. Wish I could be so forgiving.
Dan

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on December 12, 2005

Too sad, Kay, but then again christmas is the time for sad tales...ed

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 12, 2005

such sadness within your troubled heart ... let hope bring love back into your soul ... allow it to grow ...
your poem moves all our hearts ...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on December 12, 2005

We always hope that the ones we love will find true love and happiness but it is sometimes difficult when we love them so much and they find it in someone else. Beautiful poem, but so very bittersweet.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on December 12, 2005

Exceptionally honest piece of work. Nice to read you again Kay.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 12, 2005

This is such a bittersweet heart and soul felt poem Kay, you have me misty eyed! Written from an unselfish beautiful heart! Thanks for sharing. So good to read your work again, it has been sorely missed!

Love,and a very blessed and Merry Christmas to you and yours

Eileen

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on December 12, 2005

Ouch! What an achingly, good write!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 12, 2005

Beautiful and compassionate write from a kind and wonderful spirited lady who I am sure will not be without love for long.

Felix

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on December 12, 2005

Very touching, especially the ending. Good work, Kay.

Ron

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 12, 2005

powerfully thought provoking, Kay...I hear you loud and clear. I have to sincerely keep a lot of what I want to say unsaid or else....

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.